*A/N Hey guys! please review but if you can't be bothered it would bee nice if you can just leave a comment. Also feel free to interpret this how you like :) Also this has a slow tune to it. The kind of words that you would whisper-sing (if that makes sense :P )
Hey there,
Did you say my name?
I thought I heard you just then,
I swear I heard you call,
Maybe,
We've met before in another dream,
You seem familiar to me,
I swear I've seen you before.
And everything I've done, is reflected,
Right in front of me, on your face.
All the painful memories, I've pushed away,
Are rushing back to me, like a tidal wave.
And I can't hide from myself anymore.
Why did you return after so long?
Leave me be,
Leave in peace,
I'm not ready to go, yet.
If it's my time,
Then give me a moment,
'Cause I'm not ready to go yet.
How can,
You come back from the dead?
I thought you had left me,
I swear I thought you were gone.
Did I,
Forget something about life?
That everyone must die?
I guess my time has come.
And everything I've done, is reflected,
Right in front of me, on your face.
All the painful memories, I've pushed away,
Are rushing back to me, like a tidal wave.
And I can't hide from myself anymore.
Why did you return after so long?
Leave me be,
Leave me in peace,
I'm not ready to go, yet.
If it's my time,
Then give me a moment,
'Cause I'm not ready to go yet.
I think of all the times, I was happy,
I remember all the days you were next to me.
If only I could pause and repeat,
All those moments that make everything that's me.
And I can't hide from myself anymore.
Why did you return after so long?
Leave me be,
Leave me in peace,
I'm not ready to go, yet.
If it's my time,
Then give me a moment,
'Cause I need you to hold my hand.
As we go...
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This could totally be a real song, if someone would write music to go with it.
I like that the lyrics were slightly vague, not so vague that you have no idea what they're trying to say, like some songs I've heard.
Very touching. For some reason it reminded me of Doctor Who. It would be amazing if there was music to go with it! Very nicely done
Thank you so much!!
Wow!! This was really good, maybe I'm just jealous because I can't write poems/lyrics.
Okay, I could totally hear the tune/melody/whatever its called going on in my head while I read it.
I like the feelings and emotion you put into this, it really lets the person who's listening feel the emotion as well.
That's really all I have to say. You did a great job, if you write any more lyrics message me!
Hope I helped...
~ WillowPaw1
Hey Willow! thanks for the review! I'm glad you could hear the tune
Oh, and I will 
Okay, thanks! And your welcome!
This is great, but this is more of a poem to me than a song. But that's okay it can be both!
I understand clearly the meaning and the meaning is a great one! I love the feelings you have mixed together in the plot of this.
Could you please explain to me why it's called Doppelganger? I don't understand that. I don't see it as a flaw, I just don't get it. Maybe I'm just weird XD
Overall this is great! Keep up your good work. Can't wait to see more from you.
It's up for interpretation, but you know how they say if you see your Doppelganger it means that you will die? Hopefully that's a good enough clue
Thank you so much for the review by the way! It means a lot