WillowCutz

Brilliant. But... Just as a note, and don't be offended,, it's a liitle drawn out when she's thinking about her new therapist. It could be a little more casual, like ...

Hey it's me Willow C. I apologize in advance for my personality. First off I found this poem a little weird. I mean what was with the screaming crazy guy, ...

Hey twenty something try at reviewing. So don't expect me to be good at it. I'll get started. I apologize in advance for my personality. First off, ugh, rhyming. One ...

Okay, first off.... You need stanzas. It seperates the poem for reading and visual appearence. When you read something like this it makes the words go on forever. The reader ...

Hey I'm here, what are your other two wishes? First off I find that rhyming is a very distracting literary element. It makes the sound of the poem a little ...

Willow C. Here to reveiw. I apologize in advance. First off the the seperation is a little off-putting. A lot of writers don't know this, but presentation is a very ...

Hey, I'm here. What are your other three wishes? JK, I'm here to review. Please excuse my personality and generally rude attitude. :D I read your sneak peak, and I ...

The prolouge is very quick It leaves me wanting more of a discription about the fire, it's not everyday your house is set on fire. Plus what a lot of ...

There is nothing here to review so I'll be brief. You are too long a member to have made a mistake The review day celebration has been giving out free ...

Reveiwing comence! Yawn. Sorry it,s late and, yawn, your story is VERY predictable. Yeah she thinks the guy next to her, her teacher doesn't have anything new to add, she'll ...

Hey, Willow C. Here to veiw again. I apoligize in advance for my personality and lack of reveiwing skills. Here goes nothing!!! First things first: Title. It could be more ...

Hey I'm here to reveiw, First off I was kind of distracted by the name, it has nothing to do with the story as I can see. Also I didn't ...

Hey, I'm Willow Cutz, (not real name, online privacy rules!) Here I go! Kay, first off the title. Kind of bored me, It seemed a little over dramatic. The title ...

Hey, I'm a superhero. My super-power is not reveiwing, so bare with me. First off, the beginning made me a little sick. Great job. Not many people can make me ...

Okay, reveiwing powers activate! First off the lines. Less of Them. They break Up how You Read the Poem Out Loud. THEY ARE NOT TO ENHANCE YOUR WRITING LIKE GLITTER! ...