Published April 15, 2013
Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for mature content.
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Hello!
I came to give you a review!
Funny how that didn't work out the way I planned...
o: how interesting!
Hey I'm here to reveiw,
First off I was kind of distracted by the name, it has nothing to do with the story as I can see.
Also I didn't really want to read it because it was rated 16+ and I'm like not 16. It didn't really need to be rated that from what I can see.
Lastly the lack of story was distracting. Perhaps you hit the buttons in the wrong order. No worries you can edit a story once you've created it. Just go into your profile, click portfolio, then click whatever folder it's in, next to Frank Prose and click the edit button. Super simple! As long as your computer is working. If not, try calling India or buy a new one. You do NEED a working computer and a story.
Wow. Thank you for the kind of review! I have never been met with such generosity on this site before. I really appreciated your honesty, but I find as if your generalizations of other cultures a tad distracting. If your going to really give a good review, I suggest being a little less nice. Also, I know there's nothing up there. For the sake of the good Lord, you didn't have to review this blank piece of shit, so please stop wasting your time and mine with rude comments.
Woah, no need to be hostile. Willow was just being sarcastic, I'm sure, and didn't mean to be rude at all.
Hello.
I was going to read this and review it... but there's no story...
Hello there.
I came for a review.
Um, I'm just saying, but there isn't a story up. Maybe its just me and I'm going crazy.
Nope.