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I definitely understood the strikethroughs/slashes bits. :D Hilarious, and brilliant as always, Clau!

Thank you kitty!!!! I knew there was something not right with that passage! I couldn't for the life of me think of what the phrase was...you rock! All right, let ...

Thanks guys! I'll work on incorporating the changes, and I'd definitely like to hear any more input anyone has! Tank you, tank you again! *does Sebastian bow*

I liked it! Cute and sassy. :P I'll do a fuller crit in a few days.

That made me squirm... *shudders* *I shall never read R rated poem again without seriously thinking about it* Not my cup of tea...

Good. :) But there's still some places that he says "Mommy" and such. I don't think I've ever heard a 12 year old say that! :lol: Tweak a bit more, ...

I'll be doing a full critique of this soon. Stay posted!

Thanks guys! *is astounded at the amount of reviews* This was a bare bones copy, something I wrote on a whim just to get stuff about Louis out. :) It ...

Yay! Loved the "field day." It was really cute, and Craig and Amelia just HAVE to get together!

Good job! More, I say, more!

*shivers and shudders* Ooooo that was creepy! I really liked it though. I think you have a great writing style, and I can't wait to read more of this!

A little repetitive, but I liked! Good job-I really like your reminiscent style. You reflect a lot of my thoughts a lot!

That creeped me out. Dude, freakiness!!!!!!! I normally hate vampire stories, but this one, since the surprise came at the end, wasn't half bad. Creepy and paranormal. Good job!

I like it-more!

Love it! I love your style, and pleeease post more!