Wiggy

Hi! Welcome to YWS! I see that you're new here, and it's nice that you've done some reviews before posting your own work, so kudos to you on that! *doffs ...

Another nice installment. :D This one seemed to be lacking the sense of...action that the other installments had, though. Also, the reactions to Lyla seemed untrue. Personally, I haven't seen ...

Oh, another installment! I can't believe I almost missed it! The only parts I saw that could use a little fixing were the parts about the clock and then just ...

It's...it's...oh, Lord, what is it? It's creepy/exhilarating/goosebump raising/great! I really liked the way you built the suspense. When he kissed her forehead is when the goosebumps came. :shock: Ni

Interesting story...kinda disturbing, as most of your stories are! lol I really think you could cut down on the cuss words, though. They were like excess fat on a piece ...

Cut the first paragraph. Entirely. The second paragraph started out the story, and it kept moving from there. I don't have time to do a proper crit, but I really ...

This was...disturbing. And not in a good way!!! :shock: I didn't know who to feel sorry for--the English teacher or the student! They both were nasty! Hmm, you definitely need ...

Ooooo....*shivers* Creepy. Good. Nice. Wonderful. Loved it. Can I speak in anything but monosyllables? :P Hey, great job! Loved it, and I didn't get the hidden meaning of the Holocaust ...

Hey Char! Sorry to burst your bubble (or tornado? ^_~), but this didn't do much for me. Basically, it was a description of wind. Yeah, nice. Anyone can do that. ...

Uh, Jacko, has anyone ever told you you are an amazing poet? This is perfect. Or the shizz (I've been using that word a lot lately...:P). However you want to ...

Frist off, welcome, welcome!!!! I'm Wiggy, resident happy, hyper, insane member, and it's great to see you here! I'd say exactly what Misty said, and also, when you write other ...

Ooo, good story! :) I'll come back to give it a proper crit later, but as for the endings, I like the first one better. Made me satisfied. *isn't blood ...

Hey Sureal! I've been meaning to comment on this since it first caught my eye on the recent post page yesterday. This was one of the most marvelous pieces I've ...

Hey kool! 8) All right, I'm going to be completely and bluntly honest with you: I didn't see any point to this piece. At all. To me, it was a ...

Jess, this was fantastic!!! You know, I never knew something like this could so touch my soul like the way this did. Man, if any of your like other work ...