once upon a time there was a magical unicorn name princess she was white witha long tale and big beutifull blue eyes. One day someone came in in her magical forest and tried to steal her horn from her. The unicorn was very upset and to punish them she pointed her horn in their faces and they instantly tunred to stone.
After that, no one dared to rob the unicorn of her horn.
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brain cramp. i'll return like later and check. does anything need to be changed?
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*Gasps* How many awards have you won for this pieace? It the most rich piece of literature I've ever read. Pleeeeeeeeeeeease post more!!! *Gets on knees and begs* PLEEEEEEASE!!!
~Pol~
Lol. Don't worry, they're all being sarcastic, including Dreamy, especially Dreamy in fact.
But seenas it's done by a member of the brilliant SPEW, I feel obliged to say that it's a wonderful piece of work
Are you being sarcastic too? This post is scaring me!
No, Lottie, they're being dead-serious...
^_~'
Everyone is being sarcastic right?
Jess, this was fantastic!!! You know, I never knew something like this could so touch my soul like the way this did. Man, if any of your like other work is lyk that, let me know, k? I just...oh...*wipes tear*...I had to say something. So beautiful!!!
*Overloads from sarcasm and flops down foaming at the mouth.*
SPEW......
Oh MAN, fishr you are like the bestest writer on this whole site! If i could rite as well as u id be so proud! r u gonna get this publishd? ud wipe harry potter off the shelves!! U ARE SO COOL AND URE RITIN IS LKE THE MOST WONDERFUL IN THE WORLD!
Woo for run on sentences!
-St. Razorblade
*sniffles* This... this WORK OF ART... is the most -sob- beautiful- sob- story I have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sniffles* and when the unicorn was happy again... that was the best part
I second the black rose.
It makes me want to shake my Humps that rock the socks of all the one's that had what it said tomorrow but not as much as yesterday but as much as now to say what couldn't be not said and having it to the max of power has no export but to give it up to the masses of ness and diss and the chocolate monkey who don't need the oranges that came next year.
INSPIRATIONAL! OR... at least.... perspirational.
*sniff* omgOt! I'm brillant!!11!!
I don't understand why people are dissing this. It's such an insightful cultural and social commentary. It's so BEAUTIFUL!
Ditto what Mesh said.
Has the whole world gone mad please mask a thread for these or something, cause even though Spew did it i can't lie about things like that.
Also please no one else do these one was enough now it's getting kinda ridiclous.
For your age, this is fantastic. I know I've already posted but I just had to come back and read it again...
I still cry with each word!!!
NEVER! *sobs and cries* It's beautiful! The bit where the unicorn got upset ... heartbreaking!
Wow ... words cannot describe how much this story means to me. It's profound, y'know? You've managed to convey the emotional conflict of the characters, the depth and complexity of the plot, the brilliantly insightful social commentary, in a few well-penned words. I'm impressed. I've spent a few hours pouring over the story, again and again, trying to find something to critique. But to be honest, it's perfect. Gorgeous stuff.
I hope I can write as well as this someday ...
Fisher, you are my hero for like, all time. Your brilliance is beyond words. I salute you.
I love this! I can't believe how good a writer you are. Lovely is all I can say. It flowed so well. The imagry was amazing, I could see everything. Great work!!!
Keep writing!
I just wanna know why this isnt the featured story.
D'you know...you bewildered me.
Yes, totally involving...and um, good...and and I don't speak ...l337? Or is it...
Forget it.
I thought you were Nate for minute.
I've told you this already but I had to say it again - superb. The flow of the story was just magical. I'll have to check out more of your work!!!!!
oooh, that is the best story ever! what a piece, what a beautiful, lovely heart warming story. I've never read or seen better. I'm so jealous now
also, tons of spelling mistakes, but other then that, BEAUTIFUL!!! 
I am seirously going to die if I see another one of these... craps...
I am serious, this belongs in Randomness or some sort of flame, burning.
What is wrong with all of you people?!
I don't care if SPEW issued it...
WHAT IS UP WITH YOU PEOPLE?!