Weymouth

This poem really struck me right from the first line, it's really intense, and there's no build up to an event, it just goes straight in, which I really like. ...

I really like this, the stanzas are well set out, the punctuation is perfect, and the religious theme is quite warming, it's a nice change to see people expressing love ...

Wow, this is powerful to say the least. I like how you start each stanza off with a different adjective in the first line, especially in the last stanza where ...

I like this, the way it starts off really grabs your attention. Also like the way you've described stepping into the movie, like you're looking at something very closely. 'They ...

I really like this, especially 'i've lost the key to my ribcage' I think that's just an amazing line. I also like the way you've linked the body parts, like ...

Wow, this is really great! There's a lot of emotion in this, and you have used exactly the right words in the right way. I especially like the 'lips bumped' ...

I love this, especially your use of adjectives, like 'haze' and 'ethereal' (it's been a long time since i've seen that word used). I also like the way you progresses ...

Wow. This poem blew me away, it's so powerful and moving, I loved it! The only thing i can think to say is the use of stanzas. They will break ...

This is a great poem, lots of nice ideas, every word is used well and in the right context. All that I have to say is punctuation. Capital letters, commas ...

This is an amazing piece of work, I couldn't find a fault even if i tried! It's really powerful, and as a reader I almost feel a connection with you, ...

I think that this poem, although depressing, is beautifully written. I especially love the little bits of prose between some stanzas, as a reader it really pulls you in, as ...

Great poem, I think that the "to you" and "do you are nicely linked, although they should be capitalised at the beginning. Also, there should be a full stop at ...