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This was beautiful and creative, but it felt like prose with line breaks and not a poem. It reminds me of some of Kafka's early stuff somehow, stylistically I guess, ...

What? You don't need to say those words to put people on edge, and "anxiety" is so clinical I wouldn't use it in this. Also, I thought that it was ...

Actually, about oesophagus, that is an accepted pronunciation even though it's not common in American English, and sometimes people will even write %u0153sophagus.

The sound represented by in is actually not found in most major dialects of English, as it's the "German " sound. The native pronunciation of names is actually *not* used ...

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All the English haikus I have ever seen have 5-7-5 syllables. I know in Japanese they're not actually counting the syllables and that means English haikus are not really the ...

This doesn't really feel like a poem, it just feels like a paragraph with line breaks, even though the writing is really good.

OK, the Perpetual It stands for humanity's decision to relate to everything as "it", including ourselves, which leads us to a special kind of hell, in which everything becomes terrible ...

That wasn't Old English, that was Modern English with some Early Modern English thrown in. If I had written a poem in Old English you probably wouldn't've understood at all. ...

Thanks. The song is actually not a nursery rhyme, it's a poem by Goethe. The English translation of its title is "the Son of the Muses", which is where the ...

Thank you, I'll fix the typos. I tend to type on my iPad, turn off my autocorrect so it doesn't underline my made-up words, and then not read stuff through ...

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I decided to read this because it reminds me of Kafka's The Trial which I read long ago. Anyways, I feel like this poem is mostly just prose with line ...

I think you accidentally wrote the description of the poem instead of the actual poem. Unless, of course, this is supposed to be some sort of weird postmodern thing, where ...