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Re: self-portrait of the poet as a
Hello, vulpesvelox! This is a wonderful poem you have here. As a trans masc myself, I heavily relate to it. It reminds me of the first time I used a ...
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Re: I'm Falling In Love
Hello! I'm Wist and I'm here to review your poem. Your poem is deeply emotional and captures the experience of falling in love with someone in a modern context. The ...
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Re: You Don't Deserve To Be Sad
Hello, nkaujrainx! I'm Wist and I'm here to review your short story. Your short story is incredibly moving and resonates with me on a deeply emotional level. You masterfully delve ...
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Re: Wanderer
Hello, MenacingFish! A belated welcome to YWS. I'm Wist and I'll be reviewing your lovely short story today. I was intrigued because I don't see many first-person present-tense stories here. ...
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Re: #classifried
Hello, Kate! It's been a while since I've haunted your works, so I'm here again! I love stimulating, thought-provoking pieces of media, so this one clearly called to me. I ...
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Re: William and his kids
Hello, vampricone! I've watched enough Game Theory FNAF videos to say this was a good fanfiction poem for the game series. Your story delves deep into the twisted lives of ...
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Re: italics collection
Hello Century! I love the concept behind this poetry collection, so I had to stop by and leave a review. Italics can add such a lovely form of aesthetic to ...
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Re: A Clown?!
Hello, Vampricone! Your short story is thrilling and kept me on the edge of my seat. Your descriptions strengthened the scenes nicely when they were implemented. The build-up of tension ...
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Re: Reconcile
Hello, Bhavaya! I'm Wist and I'm here to review your poem today. I'm not sure you meant it as a poem, since it's categorized as "other" but I definitely find ...
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Re: The Finch Family Pie Shop
Hello, Ellie! What a chilling story! I love watching the progression of Jason from an innocent child to a murder accomplice. It adds a layer of horror to watch a ...
Aug 9, 2024 -
Re: birthday wishes
Hello, farq4d! Wist here to review your touching short story. Your short story is a poignant and emotional portrayal of a difficult and heart-wrenching experience of grief and how it ...
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Re: deep sink(ing) thoughts
Hello, @Spearmint and @EllieMae (tagging you both so Ellie gets notified) Wist here to review some classic deep deep sink poetry. I love that the deep sink gets some love ...
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Re: I’m not scared of the demon (Melinda’s song to Samuel)
Hello, Vampricone! Wist back again to leave a short review of your song. ^^ Your song struck a chord with me. It beautifully captures the pure and unwavering love between ...
Aug 7, 2024 -
Re: Gabriel apologizes to Gwyneth
Hello, Vampricone! First of all, just the fact that you wrote this has made me so happy. I was mostly joking in my review, but I do not regret it ...
Aug 6, 2024 -
Re: h(a)unting
Hello, phantasm! Wist here to review your lovely poem. I love prose poetry and the style you've written today heavily mirrors prose. So, I was very excited to read your ...
Aug 5, 2024
