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WeepingWisteria

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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: self-portrait of the poet as a

    Hello, vulpesvelox! This is a wonderful poem you have here. As a trans masc myself, I heavily relate to it. It reminds me of the first time I used a ...

    Jul 19
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: I'm Falling In Love

    Hello! I'm Wist and I'm here to review your poem. Your poem is deeply emotional and captures the experience of falling in love with someone in a modern context. The ...

    Aug 18, 2024
  • Short Story » General, General Re: You Don't Deserve To Be Sad

    Hello, nkaujrainx! I'm Wist and I'm here to review your short story. Your short story is incredibly moving and resonates with me on a deeply emotional level. You masterfully delve ...

    Aug 17, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Wanderer

    Hello, MenacingFish! A belated welcome to YWS. I'm Wist and I'll be reviewing your lovely short story today. I was intrigued because I don't see many first-person present-tense stories here. ...

    Aug 16, 2024
  • Poetry » Humor, Mystery / Suspense Re: #classifried

    Hello, Kate! It's been a while since I've haunted your works, so I'm here again! I love stimulating, thought-provoking pieces of media, so this one clearly called to me. I ...

    Aug 15, 2024
  • Lyrics » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: William and his kids

    Hello, vampricone! I've watched enough Game Theory FNAF videos to say this was a good fanfiction poem for the game series. Your story delves deep into the twisted lives of ...

    Aug 14, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: italics collection

    Hello Century! I love the concept behind this poetry collection, so I had to stop by and leave a review. Italics can add such a lovely form of aesthetic to ...

    Aug 13, 2024
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: A Clown?!

    Hello, Vampricone! Your short story is thrilling and kept me on the edge of my seat. Your descriptions strengthened the scenes nicely when they were implemented. The build-up of tension ...

    Aug 12, 2024
  • Other » General, Realistic Re: Reconcile

    Hello, Bhavaya! I'm Wist and I'm here to review your poem today. I'm not sure you meant it as a poem, since it's categorized as "other" but I definitely find ...

    Aug 11, 2024
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Finch Family Pie Shop

    Hello, Ellie! What a chilling story! I love watching the progression of Jason from an innocent child to a murder accomplice. It adds a layer of horror to watch a ...

    Aug 9, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: birthday wishes

    Hello, farq4d! Wist here to review your touching short story. Your short story is a poignant and emotional portrayal of a difficult and heart-wrenching experience of grief and how it ...

    Aug 9, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: deep sink(ing) thoughts

    Hello, @Spearmint and @EllieMae (tagging you both so Ellie gets notified) Wist here to review some classic deep deep sink poetry. I love that the deep sink gets some love ...

    Aug 8, 2024
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Supernatural Re: I’m not scared of the demon (Melinda’s song to Samuel)

    Hello, Vampricone! Wist back again to leave a short review of your song. ^^ Your song struck a chord with me. It beautifully captures the pure and unwavering love between ...

    Aug 7, 2024
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Gabriel apologizes to Gwyneth

    Hello, Vampricone! First of all, just the fact that you wrote this has made me so happy. I was mostly joking in my review, but I do not regret it ...

    Aug 6, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: h(a)unting

    Hello, phantasm! Wist here to review your lovely poem. I love prose poetry and the style you've written today heavily mirrors prose. So, I was very excited to read your ...

    Aug 5, 2024


By the sweat of your brow you will eat your food until you return to the ground, since from it you were taken; for dust you are and to dust you will return.
— Genesis 3:19