Way2Dawn

Interesting short I must say though the message was quite clear to me i enjoyed it never the less. Keep it up! -Dawn

Short and so very sweet Lady purple great work! Your imagination amazes me for its hard to find such creativity now-a-days. Anyways again good work and hope to see future ...

Another great poem Ash I can see a few people relating to it so I believe it was a great subject to write poetry on. The flow was a bit ...

You never seem to let me down Babygirl. Another great poem :) . If only the world could be as we wanted it to, but if your looking for change ...

Another fantastic poem Babygirl and I think you should keep the name it fits the work extremely well. I too believe that there is little individuality in our society today ...

Stange short story but interesting to say the lest. I did enjoy it, but the main character felt dull and a bit underdeveloped. You had my attension all the way ...

Fantastic start to a possibly engaging story. I liked how it jump right into it and kept my attention all the way to the end. I believe you did a ...

Another great piece of work Babygirl it really is nice to see this type of poetry on YWS. I for one believe that great writing can come out of great ...

Hey nice poem for such a long break. The flow was a bit bumpy but the message was clear. I have to disagree however. I do not believe that it ...

Uplifting indeed! The poem itself is great, but for you to write to a friend in need makes it phenomenal. Its always good to be there for a friend in ...

Short and a bit dark I liked it never the less though. I can only assume its about the perspective of a abandoned child that is writing to his/her father. ...

Interesting prologue from what I read though there is not much to run with on this. It could use a bit more back story on were they came from or ...

LQTM (laughing quietly to myself). At the beginning it was a bit confusing what exactly was going on. I reread nearly every line over again until the very end which ...

Hey ash great job poem of the possible future to come. Every has their own idea of how the end will come it was interesting to read your doomsday theory. ...

Short and so very sweet.I've seen the movie a few times and I think you did a great job in capturing Rose's character and not such a bad job for ...