Published June 15, 2010
....
Points:
Time spent:
IP address:
Canary word: Present
Possible AI signals:
Original Text:
Are you sure you want to delete this comment? This cannot be undone.
Mark this comment as a review? Points will be awarded to the poster.
Your comment was posted, but it wasn’t long enough to count as a review. Reviews need about four complete sentences (at least 250 characters). Try writing another review that explains your thoughts in more detail — the author will appreciate it, and you’ll earn points for it.
140,630 Literary Works • 673,569 Reviews
This poem is amazing. I really like your writing style.
Don't think I can mention and thing "wrong" with it, except as mentioned above.
Otherwise its perfect.
Can't wait to read some more of your work!
About reviewing : I know, and starting tomorrow I'm forcing myself to write some reviews. They'll probably be not so great though
wow! this had me hooked right from the start and it didn't disappoint me at the end. it had wonderful rhythm and clever rhyme.
this is definitely my favourite stanza
i think this would be better as sooner or later, we all have to face but i dunno, that's just me.
well done!
-jackle
ps. you should do more reviews or people wont review your work
Another great poem Ash I can see a few people relating to it so I believe it was a great subject to write poetry on. The flow was a bit rocky towards the end but the start was good a engaging.
Keep it up and I look forward to future work!
-Dawn