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  • Other » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: I Believe

    Hey, Sybil here! I'm not much of a RoTG fan, but I can really appreciate this fan fic. I've written some fan fics of my own and I'd liked to ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Invitation of a Heart

    Hey Sybil here ^.^ This short reminds me much of E.A. Poe! As you can already assume, I'm a big fan of these horror shorts :) this is really nice! ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Warden's Son

    Hello, Sybil here to say a few things! First thing's first...I cannot describe how much I liked this piece! It was very well written! Very vivid and clear! Though the ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Field Slaves

    Hey! I'd just like to say how much this piece reminds me so much of a Browning poem. It's nice and lyrical, when I read it out loud, the words ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: FAREWELL, HELLO

    Hey! First thing's first, this was a really good piece! I didn't see any nitpicks or what! ^^ The very title was promising, and I will say that I was ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: We are who we are

    Hello! This is a nice piece you go here, reminds much of a self-absorbed society that we are now in. I liked the message of it. Much like a dramatic ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Just a Spark

    Hey, Sybil here! First thing's first, welcome to YWS! :D I liked how idealistic this is! More of a speech than a poem, if I may say. ;) Good job ...

    Dec 26, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Secrets

    Hello, it's Sybil again! Once again, you have displayed literary skill that is beyond your years! You write like a true author in the making! (I should know, I check ...

    Dec 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A tale in a letter.

    Hey Burrow, just passed by! :) Got really interested with the title because I've seen a lot of stories told in correspondence :). I just have to say that you ...

    Dec 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: For not a moment, time did halt

    Hello Sybil here! :) What can I say, I loved this so much! I really felt your emotion in this piece, wonderful imagery, good wording and it wasn't at all ...

    Dec 24, 2014
  • Short Story » Satire, Mystery / Suspense Re: Bloody Screams of Murder in the Night

    Hello Sybil here :) Gosh, this was a really cute one for a short! Plot twist was really unexpected! I liked how descriptive you were on the first few scenes ...

    Dec 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: Done.

    Hey! Sybil here to say a few words About your piece :) First of all, the poem started strong and the story was very intriguing. There was a good beat ...

    Dec 22, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Let's Be Sheep.

    Sybil here! ;) Before I review this, I'd just like to say that I noticed what you did there...Being called Sheep and your avatar. I sense Le Petit Prince in ...

    Dec 22, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Butts

    Hello! Sybil here ;) Okay, I cannot tell you how much I love this! There were few errors and the story's flow was in pace. Your narration was perfectly comedic ...

    Dec 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Yet Not

    Hello :) This piece really speaks to me. I find it perfect for being named in the realistic genre. It was consistent and the wording was well chosen. Your title ...

    Dec 21, 2014


See, we could have been called The Shoes.
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