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Re: I Believe
Hey, Sybil here! I'm not much of a RoTG fan, but I can really appreciate this fan fic. I've written some fan fics of my own and I'd liked to ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Invitation of a Heart
Hey Sybil here ^.^ This short reminds me much of E.A. Poe! As you can already assume, I'm a big fan of these horror shorts :) this is really nice! ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: The Warden's Son
Hello, Sybil here to say a few things! First thing's first...I cannot describe how much I liked this piece! It was very well written! Very vivid and clear! Though the ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: The Field Slaves
Hey! I'd just like to say how much this piece reminds me so much of a Browning poem. It's nice and lyrical, when I read it out loud, the words ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: FAREWELL, HELLO
Hey! First thing's first, this was a really good piece! I didn't see any nitpicks or what! ^^ The very title was promising, and I will say that I was ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: We are who we are
Hello! This is a nice piece you go here, reminds much of a self-absorbed society that we are now in. I liked the message of it. Much like a dramatic ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Just a Spark
Hey, Sybil here! First thing's first, welcome to YWS! :D I liked how idealistic this is! More of a speech than a poem, if I may say. ;) Good job ...
Dec 26, 2014 -
Re: Secrets
Hello, it's Sybil again! Once again, you have displayed literary skill that is beyond your years! You write like a true author in the making! (I should know, I check ...
Dec 24, 2014 -
Re: A tale in a letter.
Hey Burrow, just passed by! :) Got really interested with the title because I've seen a lot of stories told in correspondence :). I just have to say that you ...
Dec 24, 2014 -
Re: For not a moment, time did halt
Hello Sybil here! :) What can I say, I loved this so much! I really felt your emotion in this piece, wonderful imagery, good wording and it wasn't at all ...
Dec 24, 2014 -
Re: Bloody Screams of Murder in the Night
Hello Sybil here :) Gosh, this was a really cute one for a short! Plot twist was really unexpected! I liked how descriptive you were on the first few scenes ...
Dec 24, 2014 -
Re: Done.
Hey! Sybil here to say a few words About your piece :) First of all, the poem started strong and the story was very intriguing. There was a good beat ...
Dec 22, 2014 -
Re: Let's Be Sheep.
Sybil here! ;) Before I review this, I'd just like to say that I noticed what you did there...Being called Sheep and your avatar. I sense Le Petit Prince in ...
Dec 22, 2014 -
Re: Butts
Hello! Sybil here ;) Okay, I cannot tell you how much I love this! There were few errors and the story's flow was in pace. Your narration was perfectly comedic ...
Dec 22, 2014 -
Re: Yet Not
Hello :) This piece really speaks to me. I find it perfect for being named in the realistic genre. It was consistent and the wording was well chosen. Your title ...
Dec 21, 2014
