WaitingForLife

Heya! Before I say anything, I have to state that I'm not truly a believer, so I perhaps haven't as much emotional connection with this poem. The metaphysical questions here ...

Heyou! Welcome to YWS, most importantly! I hope you enjoy your stay :) Nows, onto the review. Firstly, this does seem a little too short. I think you should expound ...

Seems legit enough, though it's hard to gather too big of an expression from such a short piece. This does seem more of a summary you'd find on the back ...

Heya! Zombies, zombies, I don't know if I like them or not. :D I do know I like your main character though. Many people (even in movies) like to have ...

Heya! I had a couple of points in mind as I read this, but Metalmauzen went through them already. I'd like to emphasize the impact of structure though, even if ...

Heya! This was nice, had a great flow to it. I don't have much to say; I really liked "And she realized that even wanting peace / can create a ...

Heya! My first review in a while, well, a very long while, but I'll see what I can do. I take it that this poem means something to you personally ...

You know, I hate having to admit this, but this touched me. I hate the notion 'cause I've gone through something sorta similar, maybe not on such an epic scale ...

Heya, and welcome to YWS! ^^ I'll apologize in advance for the brievity of this "review" which actually bears closer resemblance to a useless comment. Truth is, this was good ...

Hello, hello! Kinda short, huh? But that's okay, as it is an excerpt only! As someone said before me, you give good hints as to what would happen later on, ...

Fuck yeah! This really fit into my mood at the moment, so thanks for a great read! Normally I would comment on the extensive use of question- and exclamation marks, ...

Heya! The message in this was a good one. However, I think the poem itself could be, and should be, polished a bit more. First thing, your rhyme scheme. The ...

Heya! One of the most interesting poems I've read in a while. I admire your balls for writing something as graphic and raw as this. It was the perfect way ...

Well, well, well. This was... really good actually. :D I especially enjoyed your descriptions of the fight, the little tweaks and twists that took it away from "he attacked, he ...

Damn you for cutting the chapter off at that point, damn you real good. :D Now you've got me hooked and waiting for the next part. I usually do nit-picks ...