Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm Knight Hardy here on a mission to ensure that all works on YWS has at least two reviews. You will probably never see this but....Imma do this anyway.
Anyway let's get right to it,
We walk among you.
Voltages - that's what the ancient Indians called our species. Human-like creatures with control over elements of nature: fire, wind, water, storms, light...
There is a mark on our forearms, the branding of our kind, in the shape of an object symbolizing our power. Mine...lightning. There's a bolt straight across my wrist, blue as if inked.
Ooooh...thats interesting, not entirely sure how the word Voltages would come up in ancient times cause that's a fairly recent word that has to do with electricity but, uhh otherwise, this is a pretty epic sounding premise right there, I can almost imagine as a voiceover to the start of a movie or more like a trailer here with how this is being said here. The branding part of things also seem rather important considering it is in the title itself and mentioned by this person...so, well, off to a strong start here this prologue.
Most of us grow up in the shelter of the Elders - the immortal Voltages - and are separated into groups of five or six to create a dream team, in a sense. Then we're sent out, either looking for Shadows - those of us who have been stuck in the dark, left to discover and handle their powers in the real world - or for Hiddens - the rebels.
What we don't know is how to tell them apart...
Well...that is rather cool there...definitely seems like the sort of thing that can lead to lots of confusion and chaos and potential violence there, makes you wonder how these elders haven't tried devising some way of getting around that problem, cause it sounds like they've had a pretty long time to try and think of a solution here. Well, at any rate, it does make for a pretty awesome premise right here...and I think this headed towards some intriguing territory, at any rate, it seems like a book that I'd read.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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