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Wow thanks

Powerful and sad, theres nothing else you can say.

I really like this, moving, good wording, good structure and an overall nice poem.

Nice. A interesting style you've you used to describe fear, I don't really think it needs anything else, simple and gets the meaning across quite well.

Very nice, some lines throughout the poem sounded abit forced but other than that very good.

Not bad, but not brilliant either. Your emotions were expressed strongly but a little vaguely.

Man can I realate to that, no one takes you seriously when your a kid. A good poem, needs some work. The theme was the best thing here, countless kids ...

Thanks anonamuse.

K thanks guys, It's still in rough draft so i've only put the basic ideas for it down, but i see what you mean by it not sounding um "poemy" ...

Thanks pinata, I really hope I get an A in this for school... especially since i havnt got an A all year... Thanks

I don't really understand the meaning very well, how ever I like it this way. It lets me expand on your very nice job and come up with my own ...