Vivian

Wow, I have to say I was not expecting that. The first paragraph made me think she just couldn't leave her house, now you've left me wondering why she was ...

I enjoyed, it was so real. Did you just write this today or found these in a shoebox somewhere? They're very well thought out. I only see one mistake. For ...

Okay, I don't how much of a review this will be or if will help. But I'm going to go ahead anyways. First off, I love the poem. It's beautiful ...

Hey, time for a review (if this counts). ;) Alright, I love the poem, I could visualize it and it made me think. There was a nice flow and I ...

Hello, here for a review. Firstly, love the poem, it's a real contradiction. Just like the title. :) Anyways, I just have two things to point out. 1. "You use, ...

Hey, Viv here to do a review. This is a really nice poem with good imagery and great wording. Though i felt the last line of the last stanza ws ...

Aw, so sweet. I think a good name for this poem should be titled "For Katie" . I see absolutely nothing wrong with this poem and just have to point ...

Hey, Viv here to try and do a review. Great poem, I loved it. It just kept the topic of hope and creation in mind, even in the last stanza. ...

Hey Viv here to do a review. First off, love the poem, really makes one think about life and time and what the string represents. Now then, just a few ...

Hey, Viv here to try and review. Truthfully, I don't see anything wrong with the poem and I like. I just want to know what the colors represent and if ...

Viv here to try and review. Yeah this accurately describes confusion to me, so a thumbs up for that. But what do you mean by confusion "isn't creation"? Though I ...

Hey, I remember reading this. Reading it again makes me feel like it'd be great movie about fate and stars and all that stuff. It's such a sweet story. Now ...

Hey, Viv here to do a review. Firstly, I like the title, it draws people in. But your line starter "this defile" confused me. We you using the word defile ...

Hey, Vivian here. First off great poem, the title drew me in, although it's a bit confusing. I don't see many things wrong but just as well you should get ...

Okay, I just started crying because I've been following all these cases and you've made what I see as the only point. This society has a long way to go ...