Vivian

Hey Fortis remember me. =) I don't think this is a haiku an it's really good so you could make it longer. There are many ways to describe the color ...

Gosh, nice poem. It's sounds intense at the last two-three stanza's. It seems like the narrator believes that only the other party will regret the break up as she tells ...

Morning. :o Nice poem I like. Does this - "Someplace between the diaper Changes and graduation caps, " mean she had a child in high school? " And the last ...

Hello Night, Vivian here. I liked your poem it's very dramatic, like Romeo and Juliet the ending anyway. I like the theme since fairy tales always had a deeper story ...

Wow depressing. I have a lot of things to say but am wondering whose perspective I should put it in. So I'll start off with a question. What happens to ...

Hello there. I like this poem it's very nice but I don't think the picture describes it. Unless you're using it to describe the first line for beauty, if so ...

This is a very... what's the word? It's a very good poem that feels so deep and I love it. Is the narrator in high school because of the last ...

I like it, how do I find the rest? No wait I should probably ask if you posted the rest? ^o^ Right It's me again! That's a little late. It ...

Woah, sounds very intense. Those padded rooms don't have clocks (I think). It's very strange to be always counting the time but very commendable that he was able too. This ...

This sounds like a sad nostalgic poem and I really love it. I think there should be more detail though and you should probably take the "S" off of "Memories" ...

Hi there, like the poem it's quite beautiful. I am glad to know I am not the only one to see the beauty of a dead flower and I like ...

Love the poem and the title it is very dramatic with a few known clips. But I'm confused, do you not have her or are you in denial? Otherwise is ...

My first thoughts when I read bouquet and white frock was wedding! With your descriptions I did not realize the girl was blind until you said so. :[] It's a ...

Hey I like your poem it's somewhat serene. The title is "breathtaking" (no pun intended) :) :) I like your thought s about love since my own thoughts are half ...

You hit dead on the nail with romance and made it even more so by calling the girl (or guy) and angel. It's a nice refreshing poem that makes you ...