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Re: The book of Livia Chapter 1 I did it again
Wow, I was wondering what was going on when she said "so many times before". If she's done it so many times before, she should be able to control it ...
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: Son of a Killer ch2
His name is Hospital? Who thought that up? Is his sister the one in the hospital? He really got a personality change with that threat. The story's good, I was ...
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: He Thinks
Hey CTW nice poem. Just can't focus on math class but the stuff we get out of it seems to be good. :) It'd be kind of stupid of me, ...
Sep 10, 2013 -
Re: House of Whispers: Chapter 2 - Faerie Haven
Truly a magical house. It's long and descriptive yet still leaves room for imagination. I don't know why anyone would want to leave that house, but of course the haunting ...
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: House of Whispers: Chapter 1 - Voices in the Forest
Hey Liaya, glad I could read the first chapter. This place sounds so beautiful and breathtaking that I want to go there. What's wrong with the mother, does she hate ...
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: Son of a Killer ch1
No wonder he thinks he could be a killer. TT Nice idea, I wonder what his dad did. And where was his sister? Are there names really Spit and Rummage? ...
Sep 5, 2013 -
Re: You
Hey Lyrical, nice poem. (I think I like guy #2^^) It's romantic at the end but a rant in the beginning and I wonder if that guy has read it. ...
Sep 5, 2013 -
Re: The Candle.
Hey... I kind of didn't know what ATLA meant until I heard Azula's name. I have to say this story is hilarious. It's hard to believe Azula's mother doesn't hate ...
Sep 5, 2013 -
Re: Heartless Love
Contradicting title. :) Hey Rose, I like this poem it's sweet and realistic. We're bond by chains of love, I like that. It's wistful as well, a story that's written ...
Sep 3, 2013 -
Re: Not What You Expected
Nice poem but I don't get it. How is she seeing him if he's behind her? Then this line needs to have one fix. "I don't know who he is ...
Sep 3, 2013 -
Re: The Midnight Sky
Awww. It's so sweet. :) Hey Ali, Viv here. Nice poem, I kind of clicked on it because of the title. It sounds mysterious and romantic and that's it's allure. ...
Sep 3, 2013 -
Re: You're Somewhere Far Away
WOW. Awesome poem (it blow my mind). :) What was the book that inspired you to write such a heart felt poem. I have to read it now. "It didn't ...
Sep 3, 2013 -
Re: Depression's The Death Of Me
Wow depressing. But I'm one to talk so... Good poem sounds morbid. But silent pleas aren't often heard and there are very few who notice them and by the time ...
Sep 3, 2013 -
Re: Poetry Has Never Been For Me
Haha. ^D^ I like this poem even if it barely made sense to me. You're not the only one who enjoys some of the things you wrote. I'll get sick ...
Sep 3, 2013 -
Re: The Scent Of Roses
Wow you sound very bitter about this. I like the poem but it sounds like the cry of a broken heart. Roses for love found and roses for love lost. ...
Sep 3, 2013
