You are arrogant, conceited and a certified jerk.
You irritate and trouble me with your signature smirk.
You're naïve and stupid about my emotions at times.
You're the reason why I lose this temper of mine.
You always joke around and can never be serious.
Then you cross the line, you make me so furious!
You're very clumsy and have never acted formal.
Sometimes I wonder if you're really that normal
You're childish, noisy, always messing with my head. You decide without thinking using mere instinct instead.
Your ideas are absurd and quite unimaginable.
You push me to try things I know I cannot handle.
You can't help staring at other girls walking.
You are a pervert and that explains everything.
You've done things that have completely upset me.
You've broken promises, bringing me misery.
You choose different things from what I prefer.
The more I get to know you, the more you get weirder.
You are over confident and don't know how to be shy.
You never listen to me and I don't know why.
You're the reason why I cried myself to sleep.
I am confused, my grasp for you is losing its grip.
I've held you long enough to completely hate you.
But here are the reasons why I really love you.
Your beautiful eyes enthrall me a lot.
You stay with me even though I'm a brat.
The way you hold my hand and look into my eyes.
You melt me with your warmth like a big block of ice.
You're thoughtful, honest and very encouraging.
You're worried about me when I'm troubled by something.
You don't keep secrets, are always straightforward.
You boost my confidence when I feel that I'm barred.
You are a sweet guy, there's no doubt about it.
I love studying your smile and staring at you in secret.
You tell me I'm beautiful when I think I'm not.
You say I'm the most important person you got.
You understand me even if I'm at my worst.
You have never made fun about my fear of ghosts.
Together, we can be a silly pair.
You never left: Without me, you cannot bear.
You hug me really tight to comfort my heart.
You're never wrong about things because you are smart.
You are brave to take risks when my happiness is at stake.
You're always the first to apologize for both our mistake.
You respect me and my decisions, then always give advice.
You plan to have a home where happiness resides.
I want to join the course of your life.
You say you'll marry me someday and I'll be your wife.
Let me say these words and always remember.
I love you so much and this is forever.
Our story is just on its first few chapters.
Let's enjoy our story with all our best laughters.
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Lookie here, Its me, pandabear again!
I cant help but read all of your stuff and now I must do reviews!
Plus, I get my second star after this review, lol. Anyways back to the review.
I really love your rhyming! It is totes great and you are really good at writing poems.
I did think of someone while reading this!
Lol. It is just above all really great.
I don't see any grammar mistakes and your structure is wonderful!
Keep up the writing.
Sincerely, the lovely,
-pandabear7
Hey Lyrical, nice poem. (I think I like guy #2^^)
Parts of it reminded me of someone and parts of it didn't, but overall I think it's for a lot of people. Good work, and good luck. ;D
It's romantic at the end but a rant in the beginning and I wonder if that guy has read it. I have to know why you wrote this poem because I'm wondering about that promise. It's really sweet.
Yes, he had read it and laughed because it's the truth. The promises mentioned weren't that serious, just small things
Hi ya, its Giselle with an review !!!
I love the rhyming in this poem. The flow of this poem is a series of emotions of both good and bad times. Well done.
"You are arrogant, conceited and a certified jerk.
You irritate and trouble me with your signature smirk.
You're naïve and stupid about my emotions at times.
You're the reason why I lose this temper of mine.
You always joke around and can never be serious.
Then you cross the line, you make me so furious!"
When I read this I instantly started to think about Klaus and Caroline in the vampire diaries. Well done
Very sweet I like it. Really honestly does remind me of a person. Really the defintion of a best friend. Why was it not divided into stanzas though? Personally when I read things bunched it makes me lose place, not telling you to edit because its perfect, but do it next time.Hopefully eveyone reads this, because its good. I also wonder,whos your inspiration for this poem? you must be talking about a male, but who? Seems like someone close to you is all. Anyway, thanks for this poem, really inspired me to write poems!
the original composition of this poem were in stanzas but I tried not doing it since its like telling a story.
My inspiration for this poem is my boyfriend. Well, it's everything about him
Really cute poem. I couldn't help but snicker at some of your word choices. I'd like to point out that the first ten stanzas I believe flowed really well, and the rhyming was great. But after it seems the rhyming words didn't quite fit for a few lines. But all in all it was a great read to start off my day
Good job!