Virsanity

thanks!!! i think you made a good job. At first when I read it, it made me smile especially with the butterflies and "lust so strong" hehehe!!! It truly describe ...

Inspiration, where'd you go?!I thought that maybe you'd like to know..I'm dying ~I need your help, Its oh so bad.This book I'm writing.. Its pretty sad,No one reads it.. I ...

Open doors: shattered windows, Careless whispers fill the pillars. Here we are together, with each other thats all we need. Find yourself, take your time. Love yourself, I'll be fine. ...

Like the Rainclouds The sky still looks gray She’s flying, floating, falling Yet another day Tears sting her dark eyes She’s standing, stepping, slipping Silently she cries Eyes like the ...

My Heart; My heart is like any other heart , It can heal, and be torn apart.

Lingering footsteps, a hint of a sigh; Once beautiful whispers, now lukewarm and dry.

lead weights falling from the sky scream to just release my burden hear how loud the voices cry how long does it take to die? how long will i shut ...

My perception of time, Has gone away. And no longer can I, Understand a day. Seconds or years, They're all the same. This truly is making me, Go insane. I ...

In terms of an inpromptu speech it is good as well as the rhyming. I like the use of the words, and surely when you say this to someone, it's ...

Hello! First of all, i find the song interesting. But in the latter part, there are some redundancies and discrepancies especially on the chorus part. No offense, please don't repeat ...

I find this poem very interesting... About forbidden desire? Just like the 7 Deadly Sins. Too much desire leads to sin and sin leads to a very deadly consequences. It's ...

I like the way you described teenage life. especially this lines: Melodies woven of petty despairs and shallow depressions, Hopeless ships sunk precisely when predicted. Laughter comes only in comfort

very good ronnie!!! it's a very inspiring poem, keep it up!!! keep writing and dreaming big!!! We will all succeed! :) I remember someone that i care a lot but ...

The contrast ideas looks fantastic!!! ok, having a Summer in a Storm is very unusual. But, when the poem started, It's like wow! cool! I can see the imagery and ...

Nice imagery! i really like the scenery shown here. It's like a fairytale story of Cinderella. really like this part: "They aren't yellow with joy like the brightest marigold or ...