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Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 17
This is Yams here for a review on Review Day! I liked the beginning of the chapter. It actually had some emotional weight compared to the other scenes and I ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 16
This is Yams here for a review on Review Day! I found Zoltar interesting this chapter as I felt like I got to know them better than I did in ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Evanescent part 2
This is Yams here for a review on Review Day! This work should have a 18+ rating plus language because even if you put a "*" everyone will still know ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Evanescent part 4
This is Yams here for a review on Review Day! To get this out of the way, yeah, this work should be rated 18+ and for language like Elizabeth said. ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Chapters 5-6
This is Yams here for a review on Review Day! The first problem I have with this is that the paragraphs are really long and hard on the eyes to ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: You Are Worth It
This is Yams here for a review on Review Day! To be honest, this felt really weak to me. It had no /personal/ experiences you had with the person you're ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: A Girl's Love Letter
This is Yams here for a review on Review Day! My first problem with this poem is that the lines are very same-y. A lot of the lines just end ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: She is Death Pt. 9 - The Lover
This is Yams here for a review. I haven't read the previous chapters so I may be sort of uninformed about this all, but I will try my best to ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Burning Lights
This is Yams here for a review on Review Day! My first problem with this poem as it felt like you kind of forced the rhymes in with every reference ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Changing States ~Chapter 1~
This is Yams here for a review on Review Day! I forgot that this existed and just remembered, woo. My family's house is nowhere near the City walls. It was ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 10
This is Yams here for a review on Review Day! “Who are you,” Zoltar asked through the paw clamping him to the floor. You're asking a question here, so change ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Angels Pt. 3
This is Yams here for a review on Review Day! My first problem with this is probably just a personal complaint, but some of the paragraphs are way long and ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: greek girls and my willingness
This is Yams here for a review on Review Day! I'm going to lightly touch on what Ellstar said before and yeah, it's very hard to read with it being ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Muster Heroes — Quicksave 16
This is Yams here for a review on Review Day! I like how dramatic Kamikaz is as a character. They way they talk is spot on on how some people ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: E.N.D the demon and the Celestial Princess | Prologue
This is going to be a rather short review as this story is rather short, but I'm Yams here for a review on Review Day! My first problem with this ...
Jun 26, 2016