Virgil

This is Kaos here for a review! The concept of this poem is interesting, and we always get poems of people being robots and having no emotion, but this puts ...

This is Kaos here for a review! Jumping right into the first stanza, there's a lack of punctuation, which is something I feel you need to add. It doesn't have ...

This is Kaos here for a review, as promised! I'm going to touch on the formatting since you said you didn't know how to fix it. To make stanzas in ...

This is Kaos here for a review on this precious little BABY. [summertime stargazing] You remind me of summer nights rife with lightning storms and lightning bugs that caress us ...

This is Kaos here for another review! I don't know why the poem is formatted like this now and the rest aren't, but it's inconsistent and messes with my brain. ...

This is Kaos here for another review! Sigh. And it ends up the thing that I didn't want to happen, happened. There's still a chance for this hero to fail ...

This is Kaos here for a review on this next part! A small thing that I noticed is that the lines feel shorter in this one. The first thing that ...

This is Kaos here for another review! The parts keep getting weaker and weaker for me, and I've re-looked over it and I think that the second part is the ...

This is Kaos here for another review! So we're on the second part now and here was the thing I was mostly afraid of, which is the style not changing. ...

This is Kaos here for a review! I see that this is the start of a series or narrative, so I'll treat it as such. Some of the rhymes are ...

The poem is very rambly in what it's trying to get across in that it's wrapped up in itself. I suggest adding images to help better connect the reader to ...

This is Kaos here for a review! The first thing that I noticed about this poem is the lack of punctuation. I suggest that you add it in because it'll ...

This is Kaos here for a review, as promised. he was left with unconnected thoughts stones left overturned in a riverbed, best left forgotten yet the memories escaped into the ...

This is Kaos here for a review! In the description you said that the punctuation and capitalization was intentional so I'm going to tackle that. I don't really know why ...

This is Kaos here for a review. So I noticed that this was more of a narrative within a poem more than anything else, and here's what I have to ...