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Virgil

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Night Blossoms: Chapter 2

    This is Kaos here for a review! The first thing that I wanted to start with is that I didn't really know if Han Byul was the main character or ...

    Nov 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Blocks

    This is Kaos here for a review! Cute and short poem but that's really the most of it for me here. It tackles the idea of writer's block in a ...

    Nov 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Science Fiction Re: I'll save you, then the rest of the world.

    This is Kaos here for a review! The first thing that I picked up on is the rhyming in this poem which I wasn't particularly fond of but it didn't ...

    Nov 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Darkest Nightmare

    This is Kaos here for a review! The first comment that I wanted to make was on the rhyming. I actually didn't mind the rhyme in this poem and in ...

    Nov 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Horror, Narrative Re: The Wife

    This is Kaos here for a review on this since I spotted it still in the Green Room. Here we find out that the wife was really the murderer, and ...

    Nov 30, 2016
  • Lyrics » Action / Adventure, Lyrical Re: Song of Storms (Lyrics)

    As I know the song you're referring to, I might as well throw a review in. I didn't really get a good feel for this because there isn't really a ...

    Nov 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Untitled Poem (Be Yourself/Express Yourself)

    This is Kaos here for a review! My main problem is that this didn't bring anything new to the table. It's nothing really new and it isn't anything we haven't ...

    Nov 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: honeymoon

    This is Kaos here dropping in for a review! The first few lines interested me but they didn't really give much impact or define anything. You don't really define what ...

    Nov 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Anybody Else...

    Swooping in for a review on this poem, as promised. You'll find out throughout the poem that I liked STARRY DAYS better and why, it may just be a personal ...

    Nov 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: taurus in shackles

    This is Kaos here for a review! I've never reviewed your poetry before I don't think, but here I go. We start off with the narrative being about Persephone, and ...

    Nov 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Mutually Assured Destruction

    This is Kaos here for a review! Ah, prose poetry. I don't really know why there were only a i. and a ii. if it's going to be numbered and ...

    Nov 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Deleted 72

    This is Kaos here for a review! I didn't know the word cosmonaut existed or anything of that sort, but the context that you use it in is interesting. It ...

    Nov 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Horror, Narrative Re: The Husband

    This is Kaos here for a review! Your poetry has such a style and I think that this highlights that. There were a lot of different possibilities that ran through ...

    Nov 28, 2016
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Other Re: Fantasy

    This is Kaos here for a review! There was a lot of thoughts in this short story, so many that I wouldn't call it a short story. It overloads the ...

    Nov 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: The Things They Can't See: Chapter 2

    This is Kaos here for a review! The start of the chapter didn't really pull me in or hook me. I couldn't and didn't really have a reason to care ...

    Nov 27, 2016


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