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Virgil

  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Sacramento, California

    Well, this gained likes quickly--and for good reason. This is Nikayla here for a review! The structure at the start of this poem feels a little odd to me with ...

    Jan 31, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: skipping stones

    This is Nikayla here for a review, as promised! I like this one, and I'm a little hazy when it comes to reviewing at the moment, but let's jump right ...

    Jan 30, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: Glorious Fantasy Ch.6: A book, a clean, and too many clothes

    This is Nikayla here for a review! You have an interesting writing style, I must say. The reason I say this is because I haven't really happened to see a ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, General Re: Frost Lark News 1/15/17

    This is Nikayla here for a review! I figured I would review this since it's Review Day and it's been sitting in the Green Room for quite awhile, so let's ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Literature Re: Love Hurts - An Act of Courage

    This is Nikayla here for a review! I see that this looks to be an edited version of the article that I happened to review earlier on in the day, ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Search For Peace Book 1 ~ The Great Separation Chapter 4

    This is Nikayla here for a review! You seem to really enjoy writing about dragons. I haven't happened to tackle this novel yet before so I may as well since ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Politics Re: .

    This is Nikayla here for a review! I've heard you talk about Cat Steps, but I've never really read it, so let's jump right into the review! One of the ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Unsafe ~ Chapter 6

    This is Nikayla here for a review! The thing that I didn't really notice off the bat is that this takes place in a second-person perspective, which is a little ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: All Secrets Untold - Chapter Three (Part Two (The Sequel))

    This is Nikayla here for a review! Quite the settled down chapter if you ask me. I'm not sure which story this is of, but I'll do my best to ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The best things in life are free, and why adopting that philosophy is a bad idea

    This is Nikayla here for a review! So we see that this is something of a short story though I'm confused as to what perspective this story is told in. ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Other » General, Other Re: Arlow That Runs Free & Jinna Who Craves Love

    Heyo xMaggie, I don't usually find or review these kinds of things, but it's going to be in the Green Room in awhile if someone doesn't, so let's jump right ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Culture Re: Sign Here

    Hey there Aleta, Nikayla here with a review! So you've decided to dabble in something outside of poetry--and that's interesting. I haven't seen anything like this from you as far ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Narrative Re: Love Hurts

    This is Nikayla here for a review! So I see that this is a bit of an article or an essay and plays out sort of as a narrative. There's ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Portrait of a Shawl

    This is Nikayla here for a review! So I enjoyed this poem quite a bit and saw it still lurking in the Green Room, so I thought I may as ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Fantasy Re: Letter from Utopia

    This is Nikayla here for a review! So the title of this piece is "Letter from Utopia" and I have a couple of things to comment on that. For starters, ...

    Jan 29, 2017


Some people are hourglass shaped, some people are apple shaped, some people are pear shaped, some people are even bean pole shaped, but if we’re not careful we all become banana shaped. This is your gentle posture reminder.
— Ranger