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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Warning Signs

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review on Review Day! I almost feel if I've read this before? Is this from a jam or workshop perhaps? The whole ...

    Jul 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: (so don't lose me, follow me home) : 4/4

    Hi there mephisto! Nikayla here dropping in for a review on Review Day on the final part of this short story. Without further ado, let's jump right in. First of ...

    Jul 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Stray Children Of The Rubbish Heap

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review as requested and on Review Day! Not sure if I'm much of a fan of the capitalization. I'm not saying that ...

    Jul 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Satire, Romantic Re: Martha

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review, as promised. Different from your usual poetry yet still the same. Huh. I have to say that I enjoy the usage ...

    Jul 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: You Still Don't Understand

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! First of all, hi there Alli! I haven't reviewed any poetry of yours in awhile, so this is exciting for me. ...

    Jul 30, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General Re: (DISCONTINUED) Friends Forever [Prologue]

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review on Review Day. I'm unsure why this is a prologue. If there's any important information in this prologue that relates to ...

    Jul 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: (so don't lose me, follow me home) : 3/4

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review on Review Day! Another different perspective! Not what I expected. I thought we would've went back to Jamie though I can ...

    Jul 30, 2017
  • Other » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Burning

    Hi there mioju and welcome to YWS! This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review. I wanted to first note that this is a bit more fitting as a ...

    Jul 29, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Early Morning Escape

    Hi there infiniterectangles! This is Nikayla here dropping here in for a review. Minimalism! That's what I see in this short poem of yours. I'm unsure if I've reviewed poetry ...

    Jul 29, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: God's Assassin ★ 4

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review a little late! The opening here is pretty cool. How we get a glimpse of Rila's past through the italics for ...

    Jul 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Stress

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I understand that this is a poem about stress! A subject matter that's commonly touched upon in poetry and even in ...

    Jul 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Poem Of Writer's Block

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review as requested! I'll be perfectly honest and admit that I'm not as fond of this poem as I am the last ...

    Jul 28, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: we are artists of different kinds

    Hi there Lightsong! Nikayla here dropping in for a review as requested. Always fun reviewing your poetry, and this is no exception. Without further ado, let's jump right in. I ...

    Jul 27, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 12.2

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I love that I can follow this weekly because it's the perfect dosage of being exposed to this characters--not saying that ...

    Jul 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: For Adiba

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I found this poem with the structure that this is written in to be an odd mix between prose poetry and ...

    Jul 26, 2017


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