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Re: The Ott(er) Friend
Hello RhymortusWaever and welcome to YWS! Violet here to give you a quick review :) First off, I just want to say that I love the title. It clues the ...
Feb 20, 2024 -
Re: Earthlings for Dummies: Chapter 3 - What is Not Food
Hello, Violet here on this glorious review day! This story made me laugh so hard! There’s something so entertaining about seeing the human world through an extraterrestrial’s eyes, and you ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: Transience
Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a quick review. I really enjoyed this poem. It does have a very unique structure, but it works well. Also, you have included some ...
Sep 2, 2020 -
Re: sand
Hello! VioletFantasy here with the review I promised! This poem may be simple, but it is so beautiful. After reading it, I feel a great need to go to the ...
Sep 1, 2020 -
Re: Kalopsia
Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a review. This was a really sweet poem. It may have been simple, but the imagery is astounding! You describe nature so beautifully and ...
Aug 31, 2020 -
Re: Feathers like Autumn Rain
Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a quick review. First of all, this is absolutely beautiful! The message you are portraying and the structure are both uniquely wonderful. It’s hard ...
Aug 30, 2020 -
Re: Clouds of music and Roads of joy.
Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a review. This poem is really sweet and has a carefree vibe to it. Listening to music that you like is one of the ...
Aug 30, 2020 -
Re: Letters I Will Never Send
Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a quick review for review day. I really enjoyed reading your sweet letters! Each one was unique in its own way and reflects your ...
Aug 30, 2020 -
Re: The Finders Ch.2
Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a quick review. I really am enjoying your novel so far! It is so thrilling and full of action, especially this chapter. You wrote ...
Aug 29, 2020 -
Re: Procrastination
Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a quick review. The title of your poem instantly drew me in. I’m a master procrastinator myself, so I knew I would relate to ...
Aug 28, 2020 -
Re: [Words]
Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a quick review. This poem was very vivid and full of imagery!! I can feel the narrator’s pain and I have the need to ...
Aug 27, 2020 -
Re: A Sailor's Predicament
Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a quick review. This is a beautiful piece of writing! Your imagery is fantastic and made me feel like I was on the boat ...
Aug 26, 2020 -
Re: Last sacrifice
Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a quick review. This poem is stunning! I love your rhyme scheme. It adds just enough rhyming without being overpowering. Also, your short lines ...
Aug 25, 2020 -
Re: Our Dreams -VERY OLD POEM
Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a review. I LOVE dreams, so this poem is right up my alley. I dream at least once every night and I even used ...
Aug 24, 2020 -
Re: Art
Hello! VioletFantasy here. This is a very deep and insightful piece of art. It shows a lot of frustration that the narrator has. They are tired of being taken advantage ...
Aug 21, 2020
