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VioletFantasy

VioletFantasy

  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: The Ott(er) Friend

    Hello RhymortusWaever and welcome to YWS! Violet here to give you a quick review :) First off, I just want to say that I love the title. It clues the ...

    Feb 20, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Humor Re: Earthlings for Dummies: Chapter 3 - What is Not Food

    Hello, Violet here on this glorious review day! This story made me laugh so hard! There’s something so entertaining about seeing the human world through an extraterrestrial’s eyes, and you ...

    Jan 31, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Transience

    Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a quick review. I really enjoyed this poem. It does have a very unique structure, but it works well. Also, you have included some ...

    Sep 2, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: sand

    Hello! VioletFantasy here with the review I promised! This poem may be simple, but it is so beautiful. After reading it, I feel a great need to go to the ...

    Sep 1, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Kalopsia

    Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a review. This was a really sweet poem. It may have been simple, but the imagery is astounding! You describe nature so beautifully and ...

    Aug 31, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Feathers like Autumn Rain

    Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a quick review. First of all, this is absolutely beautiful! The message you are portraying and the structure are both uniquely wonderful. It’s hard ...

    Aug 30, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Clouds of music and Roads of joy.

    Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a review. This poem is really sweet and has a carefree vibe to it. Listening to music that you like is one of the ...

    Aug 30, 2020
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Letters I Will Never Send

    Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a quick review for review day. I really enjoyed reading your sweet letters! Each one was unique in its own way and reflects your ...

    Aug 30, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Finders Ch.2

    Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a quick review. I really am enjoying your novel so far! It is so thrilling and full of action, especially this chapter. You wrote ...

    Aug 29, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Procrastination

    Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a quick review. The title of your poem instantly drew me in. I’m a master procrastinator myself, so I knew I would relate to ...

    Aug 28, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: [Words]

    Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a quick review. This poem was very vivid and full of imagery!! I can feel the narrator’s pain and I have the need to ...

    Aug 27, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Sailor's Predicament

    Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a quick review. This is a beautiful piece of writing! Your imagery is fantastic and made me feel like I was on the boat ...

    Aug 26, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Last sacrifice

    Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a quick review. This poem is stunning! I love your rhyme scheme. It adds just enough rhyming without being overpowering. Also, your short lines ...

    Aug 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Our Dreams -VERY OLD POEM

    Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a review. I LOVE dreams, so this poem is right up my alley. I dream at least once every night and I even used ...

    Aug 24, 2020
  • Art » Realistic, Romantic Re: Art

    Hello! VioletFantasy here. This is a very deep and insightful piece of art. It shows a lot of frustration that the narrator has. They are tired of being taken advantage ...

    Aug 21, 2020


People find it far easier to forgive others for being wrong than being right.
— Albus Dumbledore