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Hi! You're right, I changed the rating! I also changed that line. I was glad you brought it up actually because I felt like "slams" was such a harsh word ...

HI! So, just out of curiosity because I'm wondering if it came across... by the end, who did you think the two people were/ how they relate to each other?

Hi Pink Panther. At first glance, the vocab choices in this piece drew my eye. Which is good! I hate boring vocabulary! But, in this instance, I'm not sure if ...

We do not delete accounts here. If we did, then all the people who spent their precious time dishing out critiques for your work would lose the credit and that ...

*locked for plagarism*

Ah! Thanks so much for the info! I was having a hard time, actually, coming up with reliable information on the ceremonies of the day and ended up improvising quiet ...

*moved to Other*

Thanks for sharing, but the poetry section is for poems written by you only. Otherwise it is plagarism. Thanks! *locked*

Is this romantic or other fiction? Need to choose one. For now I am locking this one because the other one is rated. PM me and let me know which ...

We already have two threads for this book. Use this one. Thanks! *locked*

Um. No spam. Thanks. *locked*

Thank you all for your comments on this! For some unknown reason I have a drastic attachment to this piece and have focused on it a lot lately. As for ...

Haha, thanks guys. I do appreciate the comments but this poem is from 2006 and my poetry style has changed drastically in the past two years! I love you guys, ...

Yes, this is a fiction piece. *moved to Other Fiction*

I've got it under control, it will be moved shortly.