Published April 7, 2008
I know why people do bad things
Do you
I do
People think that they have already Done bad
Have they
they must think they have
SEE,
people think they have so
their like whats the point of being GOOD!
IF U KNOW SOMEONE LIKE THIS
YOU SHOULD HELP THEM OUT
PLEASE SEND THIS TO EVERYONE YOU KNOW
YOU MIGHT CHANGE A LIFE
!!!!!!
JUST MABEY
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Um. No spam. Thanks. *locked*
Ack! It's spam!
Some punctuaton would make this poem a lot easier to read (also taking away the caps.)If you put a little rhythm in this (as someone already mentioned), then this could be better.
~MV
ok.....? I- well its ok.
Please don't use caps in your work. I think this could be written better. Get rid of the caps in this and put some rythm into it. I hope this helps!
-Rick.
Uhm,
spam?
We don't do things like that on here.
Not that I've seen of.