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Hi Tessia. I have a few suggestions here... [s]To me,[/s] F riendship is [s]like [/s]a vast tree. Whilst you are the trunk, best friends [s]make up for [/s] are the ...

Hi Rjjr. Hmm, this is very...odd? To be honest I have no idea whats going on. I think it bounces around too much...you go from ponies to treadmills to ..donkies? ...

Hi again ANA. I seem to have only one request at a time on your poetry. This format is obnoxious. "Sorry that" is repeated is repeated is repeated is repeated ...

Hi ANA. My first and only critique point I have to make right now is scrap this and start over. If your poem needs as much explanation as you have ...

Hmm, hi Lucky. I think this is an okay start to a poem, but it doesn't really have any poetic elements to make it great? There are no similies/metaphors, everything ...

Hi Perf. I'm going to nitpick first, :] The road is deserted, just like the other 32 million streets in Portland, Oregon at 3:17 in the morning. On a dripping ...

Hi Lini. Well, the first thing that sticks out to me is that there is no punctuation...and that just irks me. Commas, semicolons, periods...they are all friends of poets that ...

I kind of have to agree. I can see how taking any stanza of this poem and turning it into its own poem would be great, but as it is ...

I actually liked this quite a lot, Peng, but at the same time I didn't. The reason I liked it was because it reminded me of the British Renaissance poems ...

If you need to edit something into your poem, click the "edit" button and add it in, instead of double posting on your own poem. That way it all stays ...

“Why do you insist on having a conversation?” she snapped. Delilah looked right at him, leaving nothing to guard her from his stairs. Her voice had still been silent, one ...

Well, let's see. I get the point, but it isn't clear. And this feels very forced? There are places where the flow is completely broken and places where there was ...

Um, first and only complaint with this at the moment is the format. I can't tell you how taxing it is to read a poem that only has 1-3 words ...

Wow, Brad, this is really very well written--and very upbeat for you! I like it, you should do it more often :] the critique.. I don't know your name yet, ...

Haha! Razor, I LOVE it! It's great for the contest. One thing to point out, just a typo: Her enemy did not respond, just went on with its hyper-speed rotation, ...