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I liked this poem as well! However, I think I liked the monster one a little better. The structure I think works well for you, but the only thing I'm ...

I really liked this too, actually! I don't even know why...I just do haha. The only thing I would say is to take out the "I see love as..." in ...

I also enjoy personal emotion pieces, but I just have a hard time seeing something this short go anywhere? It's more like a diary or journal entry that would really ...

Hmm. I guess this could stem from lack of knowledge surrounding the Hun, but--as short as this is--I had a hard time following it. It seems to kind of jump ...

Okay. I like the idea that one little event can cause such a big chain of reactions and affect so many things. However, I did not enjoy reading this much. ...

I have to agree...this was actually nice--but I am not a fan of haikus. The one bit of imagery you used in this was good, but I just feel like ...

Well, there is all the grammar and puncuation errors that Disko pointed out (nice pick up, by the way). But, while I was reading it I felt like I was ...

I actually REALLY like this! It's definitely a nice pace change from the usual depression poetry here :D . It made me laugh, but it was actually written very well ...

I have to agree that there were a few issues with this. I liked stanzas 1 and 3...but the other two were just alllll discombobulated. The main thing I see ...

Okay, the first thing I noticed is this is a bunch of whole and broken thoughts broken into stanzas...I'm not really sure that did anything for you at all. I ...

This didn't really do much for me. The style was not explicitly amazing or anything and the topics do not flow. I really didn't like that the poem was directed ...

Well, hmm. I have to say that this isn't really poetry. There doesn't really have any rhythm, there is no imagery--it's just lacking any poetic elements at all. My suggestion ...

I like the idea. That said, I think there was kind of an issue putting it on paper. I mean, it's understandable and all...but it's not amazing . There aren't ...

I have to agree with cadmium. Yes, this has two personalities, become a shakesperean cast member. This really is just a list of what is going through someone's head, there ...

I have to agree with the above statements. Using a million figurative words to say something that could be as simple as 'she said hi' is just great, but there ...