Veritas

So I read this twice. The first time I wasn't sure if I liked it, so I took the liberty of rereading and found that I did like it. Very ...

I read this three times and here's what I got out of it: 1st time: Plain amazing! The language was so beautiful and precise that by the end I forgot ...

This is a well written emotional piece. I right pieces like this so I know where you're coming from. The mistake people often make while writing things like this is ...

Woa, okay that was unexpected. Poor child. :( The atmosphere was set from the beginning and stayed consistently dark. Very good writing skill, that is. I could picture everything (unfortunately). ...

Not that you'll ever see this review, but I stumbled across it and thought it was worth reviewing anyway. I really like it. It was dark and beautiful and meaningful. ...

Well, I took the time to read it so might as well give it a go: To write good fantasy, detail is the key. The fatal flaw of most fantasy ...

A fairyland....climbing a tree.... Hmmm.... Okay, let's go what that one :P Well, I have to say that I'm impressed with how you handled that prompt. :P The best part ...

Your main strength in this piece was the emotion you poured into it. I don't know if it's written off of personal experience but it doesn't even matter because you ...

I have to agree a lot with Tori. I can understand what you tried to do with repeating "I cried". Sometimes, if done right, the meaning will grow with every ...

I'm afraid I'm going to have to agree with Matthews. She hit it dead on. Your concept is cliche, but then again, most writing concepts are cliche. The trick is ...

Well...there's something about the randomness to this piece that makes it amazing! :D Honestly, some call it dumb, I call it incredible. Nonstop laughing all the way through. I really, ...

Wonderful poem with room for improvement :) I could feel the longing and the heartache in it which is good. It just felt a little fake to me. But hey, ...

OOOO...the french is what made this poem for me. You're extremely descriptive and this was truly a pleasant read. It sounds like you had a wonderful time :) keep writing, ...

Beautiful poem! The rhyme scheme was very well done and flowed excellently. It's the last few lines that I tripped on a bit: "If we can make the world, A ...

You have a great basic idea for this piece and it has a great potential, however I think you could have made it more powerful. Some writers have to sacrifice ...