Veritas

Sparrow and spaghetti....this definitely wasn't what I expected lol :P But that doesn't mean it was bad. On the other hand ti was actually very good! Few things catch my ...

Hey, this was really really good! Your rhymes weren't forced and flowed very nicely. Time is becoming my enemy It's taking so much away It does not ask what I ...

I really liked this and the message you convey. It's impressive that it came to you while looking at gross water instead of at an actual person. A testament to ...

Wow! The title itself drew me in and as I continued to read I fell more and more in love with it. That was brilliant and so terribly true. The ...

Oo! Another poem! Let's take a look shall we? I looked into the Silver Lake and my soul was layed before me. Spelling: Laid. For the lake was but a ...

I didn't like this at first but by the time I reached the end I found it quite cute and entertaining. It has that surreal and dream-like feel of a ...

Well...that was interesting :P It was creative to be sure, but I probably wouldn't turn it in for an assignment or put it in a magazine. However, if it was ...

This was very raw and free flowing and I think i like it that way. Nothing fancy but it still has an effect. The rhyme is a bit off but ...

Beautiful prose! Highly enjoyable! You just us just enough for us to use our imaginations and I'd call that successful writing. You're rhyme was a bit off in these three ...

*Shivers* That was exceptionally. And you're only twelve?? You're going to be a poet to be feared when you're older! The detail in this poem was visually stunning and exceeds ...

Ah, another love/brokenhearted poem. Well, let see what we've got here. I've read one too many terrible love poems and I'm pleased to say that this wasn't one of them ...

COMPLETELY RELATE TO THIS. Shining from the crowd You might want to put a comma here. I am destined to be, Replace the comma here with a period. hopefully one ...

I, unfortunately, have you agree strongly with hopeispeace. Readers don't generally want to read about you. (As mean as hat sounds). And If you must write about you, turn you ...

Okay, I really did get a great laugh out of this one. I didn't know where you were going with it and I was a bit on edge. Then I ...

I liked it at first, but then it when a little down hill, especially the last lines. Not really sure what you were talking about. I liked the overall poem ...