-
Re: Head bang
Hello, sabyemerald! VegasLights here to give you a review! I thought this was pretty interesting, I liked it! Now, I am not used to reviewing Articles, I am more of ...
Apr 28, 2017 -
Re: Mind
Hello, ThatIndividualThere! VegasLights here to give you a review! Your poem is different, I like different. Different is good, because you aren't like the others you are unique which is ...
Apr 28, 2017 -
Re: When Spring Has Passed
Hello, Alliyah! VegasLights here to give you a review! I loved the descriptive words that you used throughout your poem! It really gave me good imagery which let me see ...
Apr 28, 2017 -
Re: Cinder Blocks and Cement
Hello, klennon14! VegasLights here to give you a review! I think your poem has a very deep meaning and I love that! Your poem is really beautiful and speaks to ...
Apr 27, 2017 -
Re: partial/heaving.
Hello, amelie! VegasLights here to give you a review! I loved the theme throughout your poem. But I don't understand how the title matches the poem, if you could please ...
Apr 27, 2017 -
Re: energy
Hello, Kazeybear! VegasLights here to give you a review! Overall, I really loved the theme and comparisons that you gave throughout the poem. Your title completely matched the poem which ...
Apr 27, 2017 -
Re: Growth and ambition
Hello, Silberfee! VegasLights here to give you a review! I agree with @KaraStevens I do not think this is poetry, I think it is more of a short story with ...
Apr 27, 2017 -
Re: Idyllic
Hello, Stormcloud! VegasLights here to give you a review! I really love your poem because I feel like it gives me good goosebumps, I don't know if that makes sense ...
Apr 27, 2017 -
Re: Finding Purpose
Hello, BubblegumGoddess! VegasLights here to give you a review! Overall, I really do love this poem! Like all of your poems, it has a consistent theme and good details kept ...
Apr 23, 2017 -
Re: Restless Nights
Hello, BubblegumGoddess! VegasLights here to give you a review! All together this poem had a central theme throughout the poem and really good details, which I loved. But like you ...
Apr 23, 2017 -
Re: He/She/They/I
Hello, With3r3dros3! VegasLights here to give you a review! I love your poem, it is absolutely beautiful. I have a few concerns though, here they are. Details. Details are an ...
Apr 23, 2017 -
Re: depression isn't funny
Hey, SarukaTheHuman! This poem was absolutely AMAZING. I can relate to this so much because I tried telling my friends that I have depression but most of them just laughed. ...
Apr 22, 2017 -
Re: Dark Places
Hello, eloquentailurophile! Miranda here to review your poem. I just want to say that I love your poem. I love your poem because you have a constant theme and good ...
Apr 18, 2017 -
Re: A Small Girl
Hey, if it is okay with you I am going to post the poem on my account too. But, I am going to format is and edit it a little ...
Apr 16, 2017 -
Re: when i walked into the sun
Hello, Pompadour. Steam1244 here to give you a review! All I have to say is wow, just wow. You are an astonishing writer, I mean really! This has a deep ...
Mar 26, 2017
