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Re: roy g. biv
Hey, yellow! VegasLights here to review your poem. I absolutely love this poem because of the imagery and the way you showed the poem. It was a nice choice that ...
May 14, 2020 -
Re: excuses, excuses
Hey, cleverclogs! VegasLights here to review your poem. First off, THIS IS AMAZING. I love this poem so much and I love the way you captured your emotion was flawless. ...
May 13, 2020 -
Re: The Thought
Hey! VegasLights here to give you a review. Hopefully, this will help, or else, I'm just speaking complete nonsense. Anyway, let's get on with the actual review! Honestly, I love ...
Feb 1, 2018 -
Re: Lord have mercy, Christ have mercy, Lord have mercy
Hey, TheStormAroundMe! VegasLights here to give you a review. I like this poem, but personally, I think it could be a lot better. I agree with beprepered when they talk ...
May 15, 2017 -
Re: Morning Breath
Hey, lolosboing! VegasLights here to give you a review! I really love this poem. I love it because I can relate so much to it. I don't see anything that ...
May 15, 2017 -
Re: Fool of Truth
Hey, WanderingCloud! VegasLights here to give you a review! I believe your poem is wonderful and needs no fixes. I love the descriptive words that you used. They gave me ...
May 15, 2017 -
Re: Collage
Hey, Nikayla! VegasLights here to give you a review! I have to say, I like the fact that you took a challenge. I really liked the idea that the challenge ...
May 15, 2017 -
Re: carnelian dawn
Hey, Arcticus! VegasLights here to give you a review! I really love the message of your poem. I believe it is beautifully written and with a few touch ups, it ...
May 14, 2017 -
Re: Budding Leaves on a Dead Oak Tree
Hey, PickledChrissy! VegasLights here to give you a review! I like the concept and theme of your poem. It has good descriptive words that add onto the imagery of your ...
May 14, 2017 -
Re: A Waterfall of Thoughts (Preview)
Hey, writtenanxiiety! VegasLights here to give you a review! This is different than most things I read, but it was listed under poetry and I can see that. I like ...
May 13, 2017 -
Re: Sonata of Your Afterglow
Hey, DoormanDan! VegasLights here for a review! I like the lyrics and everything, but that vocabulary. Me being a simple person I didn't understand mot of the words you used, ...
May 12, 2017 -
Re: Today
Hey, Storm! VegasLights here to give you a review. You do not know how much I love reading your poems, so this is a happy day! Onto the actual poem, ...
May 12, 2017 -
Re: Wise Love
Hey, WanderingCloud! VegasLights here to give you a review! I love how your poem is simple but gets to the point. I only have 3 issues with this poem. Why ...
May 11, 2017 -
Re: I am a Poet
Hey, WanderingCloud! VegasLights here to give you a review! I see you are a new member, so welcome to the greatest website you will possibly use. Like Nikayla said, I ...
May 10, 2017 -
Re: Icarus
Hey, Nikayla! VegasLights here to give you a review! First, I'm going to answer the questions that you put, and elaborate onto it afterwards. I think the structure is a ...
May 9, 2017
