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  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Growing

    I've read a few poems like this, and not similar due to the topic. It's similar due to some poetical errors, like the one I just read. First, while it ...

    Feb 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Memories

    This was a very emotion-filled poem, and while I, personally, felt nothing, it's the same for most things. I could tell in the poem that you and your family loved ...

    Feb 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Who am I

    I like these kinds of philosophical writing things. I do quite a bit myself, so I believe I have a good bit of knowledge on how to review one. The ...

    Dec 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: You are my Moon

    Ah, shyte. Forgot to hit the review button. *facepalms* There is one word to describe this poem: NOICE! I personally agree with this, that the sun is pretty freaking horrible. ...

    Dec 10, 2015
  • Other » Humor, General Re: Band Instrument Studies

    Greetings, SnazzyPencil. I would first like to point out how incredibly hilarious and accurate this is. As a percussionist myself, i found the "DUT DUT DUT!" from the drum line ...

    Nov 16, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: Test

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    And shit, my first comment wasn't even a review. Let me try that again, yes?Let me try that again, yes?Let me try that again, yes?Let me try that again, yes?Let ...

    Nov 9, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Earth

    Straight from the beginning I could tell this was a free-form poem, no rhyme scheme. Which, in my opinion, is perfectly fine and different from most of what people imagine ...

    Nov 9, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Review, Science Re: Logic: You are Always Doing Something

    Unlike your other logic post, I agree with this. Unless you're dead, which completely invalidates the question "What are you doing?", you're doing something. However there are immeasureably small amou

    Nov 9, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Review, Science Re: Logic: You Touch Everything

    Technically, in a vacuum, you are not touching anything. There's no molecules of anything you could possibly touch, and because of that, the oxygen inside of you vents and gets ...

    Nov 9, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Plummet - Chapter 1

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    Heyyy friendo! Read your story on the google doc you sent me, I liked it so I decided I would come here and review it since you said you had ...

    Nov 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Missouri

    This haiku is fantastic in that it is so short (as all haikus go) but contains so much meaning. As I read it, the narrator is a child, a well ...

    Nov 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: To Celebrate YWS

    This is a pretty great poem. I liked how you directly referred to the reader with: "For all who is reading this poem, for all reviewing and such, give yourself ...

    Nov 8, 2015


I'll admit the two turtle doves are growing on me, but there are ten birds in this house already and we both know geese are feathered bioweapons of mass destruction.
— Silvern