Young Writers Society

Hello, Snoink.

I must say, what a masterpiece! The vocabulary, the epithet, the style - I just love it! And the way it sounds: Like a song absent the music, but with it present at the same time.

Let us start with the title, shall we?

Test

This simply hooks the reader and reels them in like a fish, they remaining both unable and unwilling to make an attempt to free themselves; it is so fitting; it is so good!

Is this a test of your genius, of your capability to write outstanding works? Did you mean to challenge your greatest work so far with this spark of brilliance, and see if you are able to produce top quality content on-demand?

Or is this a test for the reader, of their capability to understand and comprehend the extent of your brilliance?

Testy,

My word, I indeed was unaware of the meaning of this word. After extensive research I discovered that it means "easily irritated", and this simply blew my mind. Why are you (the narrator) testy? Is it because after comparing this to your other works, you might have felt like you have reached your peak, and that you shall never write anything of such quality ever again?

Or is it, perhaps, about the reader, and their inability to understand this wonderful piece of poetry? This makes me thing of myself, and of just how much I do not understand this piece of art, or any other art, for that matter.

testy,

With this second "testy" you increase the intensity of the adjective by an order of magnitude, you practiacally double its influence.

testy.

With this final one you complete the message. Short, but powerful. You not only give us a glimpse into your mindset, but you also teach us an inspirational story about a person who is really irritable, but not irritable enough to not say it in a poetic, styled fashion.

My, aren't we testy today?

By this, do you mean that you are testy on this particular day, or that you are always testy, and today is no exception? Or perhaps you ask someone if they think you are being testy? But then, is that because you want to test them, see if they are indeed worthy of your brilliance? Or is it because you get anxious about your other works for the aforementioned reason?

Whatever the case may be, I genuinely look forward to reading more of your astonishing work. Though, I can only hope that it is as good as this piece was.




Have a wonderful day!