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  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Growing

    I've read a few poems like this, and not similar due to the topic. It's similar due to some poetical errors, like the one I just read. First, while it ...

    Feb 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Memories

    This was a very emotion-filled poem, and while I, personally, felt nothing, it's the same for most things. I could tell in the poem that you and your family loved ...

    Feb 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Who am I

    I like these kinds of philosophical writing things. I do quite a bit myself, so I believe I have a good bit of knowledge on how to review one. The ...

    Dec 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: You are my Moon

    Ah, shyte. Forgot to hit the review button. *facepalms* There is one word to describe this poem: NOICE! I personally agree with this, that the sun is pretty freaking horrible. ...

    Dec 10, 2015
  • Other » Humor, General Re: Band Instrument Studies

    Greetings, SnazzyPencil. I would first like to point out how incredibly hilarious and accurate this is. As a percussionist myself, i found the "DUT DUT DUT!" from the drum line ...

    Nov 16, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: Test

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    And shit, my first comment wasn't even a review. Let me try that again, yes?Let me try that again, yes?Let me try that again, yes?Let me try that again, yes?Let ...

    Nov 9, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Earth

    Straight from the beginning I could tell this was a free-form poem, no rhyme scheme. Which, in my opinion, is perfectly fine and different from most of what people imagine ...

    Nov 9, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Review, Science Re: Logic: You are Always Doing Something

    Unlike your other logic post, I agree with this. Unless you're dead, which completely invalidates the question "What are you doing?", you're doing something. However there are immeasureably small amou

    Nov 9, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Review, Science Re: Logic: You Touch Everything

    Technically, in a vacuum, you are not touching anything. There's no molecules of anything you could possibly touch, and because of that, the oxygen inside of you vents and gets ...

    Nov 9, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Plummet - Chapter 1

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    Heyyy friendo! Read your story on the google doc you sent me, I liked it so I decided I would come here and review it since you said you had ...

    Nov 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Missouri

    This haiku is fantastic in that it is so short (as all haikus go) but contains so much meaning. As I read it, the narrator is a child, a well ...

    Nov 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: To Celebrate YWS

    This is a pretty great poem. I liked how you directly referred to the reader with: "For all who is reading this poem, for all reviewing and such, give yourself ...

    Nov 8, 2015


I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living, it's a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope. Which is what I do, and that enables you to laugh at life's realities.
— Dr. Seuss