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Re: Growing
I've read a few poems like this, and not similar due to the topic. It's similar due to some poetical errors, like the one I just read. First, while it ...
Feb 20, 2016 -
Re: Memories
This was a very emotion-filled poem, and while I, personally, felt nothing, it's the same for most things. I could tell in the poem that you and your family loved ...
Feb 20, 2016 -
Re: Who am I
I like these kinds of philosophical writing things. I do quite a bit myself, so I believe I have a good bit of knowledge on how to review one. The ...
Dec 10, 2015 -
Re: You are my Moon
Ah, shyte. Forgot to hit the review button. *facepalms* There is one word to describe this poem: NOICE! I personally agree with this, that the sun is pretty freaking horrible. ...
Dec 10, 2015 -
Re: Band Instrument Studies
Greetings, SnazzyPencil. I would first like to point out how incredibly hilarious and accurate this is. As a percussionist myself, i found the "DUT DUT DUT!" from the drum line ...
Nov 16, 2015 -
Re: Test
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Nov 9, 2015
And shit, my first comment wasn't even a review. Let me try that again, yes?Let me try that again, yes?Let me try that again, yes?Let me try that again, yes?Let ... -
Re: Earth
Straight from the beginning I could tell this was a free-form poem, no rhyme scheme. Which, in my opinion, is perfectly fine and different from most of what people imagine ...
Nov 9, 2015 -
Re: Logic: You are Always Doing Something
Unlike your other logic post, I agree with this. Unless you're dead, which completely invalidates the question "What are you doing?", you're doing something. However there are immeasureably small amou
Nov 9, 2015 -
Re: Logic: You Touch Everything
Technically, in a vacuum, you are not touching anything. There's no molecules of anything you could possibly touch, and because of that, the oxygen inside of you vents and gets ...
Nov 9, 2015 -
Re: Plummet - Chapter 1
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Nov 8, 2015
Heyyy friendo! Read your story on the google doc you sent me, I liked it so I decided I would come here and review it since you said you had ... -
Re: Missouri
This haiku is fantastic in that it is so short (as all haikus go) but contains so much meaning. As I read it, the narrator is a child, a well ...
Nov 8, 2015 -
Re: To Celebrate YWS
This is a pretty great poem. I liked how you directly referred to the reader with: "For all who is reading this poem, for all reviewing and such, give yourself ...
Nov 8, 2015
