Vanadis

Hello mSoleil! I'm Freyja and I'll be taking a look at this. First of all, I like the subject matter and how short and sweet it is. I like that ...

Hi Halcyon! Second poem, eh? Welcome to YWS! First of all, if you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask. Nice work at first glance. It can use some revision, ...

Hello Hope! First of all, thanks for choosing me to be your reviewer! I'm trying to get my thread going so I can get on the ball with my reviews ...

Hello JSPike! First I want to thank you for picking me for a review! So, let's see what's up here. Life, such a meaningless thing in that great institution. We ...

Ed! I missed you, in case you were wondering. XD Anyway, this is awesome stuff! So cool that you were able to do this so soon after your brain being ...

Hail Cheesy-one! I clicked on this thinking, "Yay trees!" (I might be a hippie.) I received a pleasant surprise. I love the early modern English thing (Old English is nearly ...

Hello there. Welcome to YWS! Inspire me. Be my muse. Trapped in these glass walls, I need your blood tonight. I trace your contours lighlty, observing your lips turn slightly. ...

Hello. I want to preface this by saying I really like it. It's got a sort of whimsical quality to it, and I'm a sort of whimsical person. So nice! ...

Hello there. I want to say that this is a lovely poem. I also started reading the original one, making notes and then found the edit. There's nothing I can ...

Hello! *blinks.* Dear gods! This is lovely! You know, I really like tonight, because your poem is the third in a row that I haven't had any corrective suggestions on; ...

Hellooo! So I liked this. Short, sweet, to the point, yet so full of truth. I saw that Moriah said she can relate to that; I think nearly everyone can ...

Hello, hello! I think everyone already caught any errors that I was going to potentially point out. So, that being said, I enjoyed this immensely. This is mostly because I ...

Hello! You are new-ish! You are new-ish-er than me, so I bid you welcome, and hope you find your stay pleasant, though we've run out of peanuts and there's no ...

Hello there! So, I have to admit that my mind is in the gutter. I saw the title of this poem, "Little Death," and remembered from Comp II "La petite ...

Hello! This was really beautiful and heartfelt; I like these lines: But all of this is means nothing to me, because I know how you used to be, It's good ...