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Hiya Pudin! I really love this. I like how you've got it somewhat as dialogue, but in poem form. I can't say I've ever seen that before, personally. It's very ...

Hiya Patatopie! Welcome to YWS! You've got a good idea going here. It's very easy to relate to, which is good in poetry. I'm just wondering about the last two ...

Hiya Matt! You've got something pretty cool going on here. There's just a need for a little more something. I don't like your psychology, messing around with my head. Listen ...

Hiya Pretty Crazy! So, you posted in my thread, and here I am! First of all: Wow. Bats! This is a really great idea, in my opinion. Bats, being nocturnal, ...

Hello there! I see you are new, so first I'd like to welcome you to YWS! I'm a third who can't seem to work out what this poem is. When ...

Hello there Sting! I see you are quite new-ish, so I'll first say welcome to YWS! I hope you're finding it awesome. Yay, a poem about writer's block! I've seen ...

Hello there. I liked how you used different colors and fonts to really add some niftiness and emphasis. I like how you tried to put everything in tune with a ...

Hiya! I like this. It reminds me of my struggles as a kid with nightmares. Some of the reviewers say it's too rushed, or needs punctuation, but I think what ...

Hi there! I sort of like this. It seems really emotional. You said you wanted a comment on a vibe...I'd say a bit sad and despairing. I'd imagine it would ...

Hi SilentOllie! This is very sweet; it made me smile at the end. It reminds me that somehow, even if you're pursuing your grandest dreams, those you love somewhat keep ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! So. You've got a nice bit of dialogue here; I like how you integrate speech with actions. No "she said this, she said that." That's ...

Hiya Jame! Welcome to YWS! First off, I'd like to say I enjoyed this so much! It's light and bittersweet in a very pleasing way. Your rhyme didn't seem forced, ...

Hello! So, you've got some good groundwork laid here. What you've got to do is expand upon it. First of all, I like the "giving up without giving up" part. ...

Hiya Padre! Nice to meet you. So...I really, really loved this. Could be the fact that I have, er, a thing for heads getting lopped off with axes, apparently, but ...

Hi Connie! I like this idea but it seems a little unfinished. It reminds me of all the times I've just completely left a place, but there was still always ...