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Welcome!!! wow you say this is your first poem? my first poem was all rhyming words and no sense lol but this right here is art. it captures me and ...

wow, i wish there was a 'love' option because this poem is truly devine. The way you describe the wind, the way you give it life and feeling truly ignites ...

hey this poem is beautiful. it really captures what many people feel, mostly the girls but it is magical at that because you and I both know us females are ...

this is a beautiful song. i only have a little comment,'You was standin there with a rose in his hand', this line didn't really make sense to me. I think ...

I'm actually feeling this point a lot. It is ingenious and it really speaks to me. I feel there is just the right amount of rhyming, its intellectual and at ...

wow i really like this poem. its very touching. this is the stanza i was most moved by: "I look inside and see Lust and vanity, Glinting things real And ...

wow this is a powerful poem. I guess a person has to look at it twice to truly understand what is behind the depth. It is quite emotional and at ...

It's ok. I feel somehow that the rhyming is excessive and maybe you might consider adding in an extra line from a between the words that rhyme to create a ...

wow, this poem is bursting with emotion! it's amazing! i like this poem a lot, there is a story here and it is told very well. Betrayal is a universally ...

Yes this poem is too short. Sometimes a short poem is all we need but in this case it leaves us hanging wanting more. In order to connect to the ...

Hey You say it isn't poetry but I think the flow and the rhythme make it qualify. It is truly deep, and very descriptive which is how first love should ...

Wow this is a very well-written first chapter. It really expresses how a child feels once a parent is lost. the dream got me kinda teary-eyed so bravo on that. ...