TwistedMuffins

Heylo~ Okay, so, um, I see at some places you haven't put any puntuations and that seems kind of intentional, though I don't get why there shouldn't be any there. ...

Helllllllllllo~~~ Here as requested! Okay! So, just a little note, the last part where you thanked everybody, you could put that in the spoiler. Just to make it look neat, ...

Hey there! First of all: As much as I love the plots related to memories, its kinda... over. Cliche, actually. :/ But ah, well! Lets see if you're poem's good ...

Hey there Toe! Okay, review time! My head is clouded by thoughts of love, Line 1 Nitpick A. Convinced by red flashes around my vision, Line 2 Sudden adrenaline, horror ...

Hey there! Intersting poem, but I'm a little surprised. You've been here 2 months longer than me, and this is your first? :/ Sad, it is, for such a great ...

Hm, okay this maybe a little tiny bit harsh, so I'm sorry. :/ Okay, first off, you didn't have a structure which was really needed here cause then it was ...

Hey there! Your poem was amazing, really. Although it was small and simple it was very fulfilling. At times, I think you were very keen on using a hyperbol that ...

Hey there! Before I begin with my rambling, let me just let you know, I'm on the mobile reviewing your work so expect a lot of mistakes, as I'm completely ...

Its amazing, really. But um, capitals wouldn't hurt anyone, yeah? Your "I"'s need to be capital, and for some reason I know you haven't done so on purpose (Before your ...

Aw.... Someone's in love ^^ XD Haha, okay, back to your poem. So cute! But, may I suggest a structure? Its amazing, no doubt, but a structure gives that professional ...

First of, I like the title. (I really don't know why, though... :O) Second, try extending the poem a little bit more. No doubt, its really good, but its short. ...

Hey there! First of all, capitals! Please D: (I'm talking about the title.) 2. It sent dry leaves to skate ahead with whispers. I love this discription! 3. There aren't ...

Its really good. But really rough. (As you said.) Puntuations: A lot are needed. And try making some of the sentences together. For example: As the oxygen And cheap light ...

Hey there! This will just be a quick review, so, bare with me xD 1. You're structure seemed constent at first, but it turned 'blah' later. 2. You're rhymes were ...

Hello~! One heck of a peice, I'll say! The descriptions were fantastic and, yes, some parts were rather confusing, but overall the meaning was clear. Death and revenge. As you ...