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Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Ten
Hello Trops is here again with a short review for you finally, again sorry it took so long. Life is starting to take over. *Frown* Anyway let's start. May I ...
Jun 18, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Nine
Hello my friend! it's me again with a review. Sorry it took so long school is starting to catch up with me. But I'm about to go on holyday, so ...
Jun 11, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Eight
Sorry for the late review. I had a few things to catch up on, but I'm here now, with a much deserved review. :D So let's start. May I just ...
May 29, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Seven
Hello again! Let's get right to it. This chapter was amazing. I can see everything coming into play, and Zoltar's emotions just makes it a whole lot better, his just ...
May 27, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Six
Hello, it's me again with a review for you yet again. :D I did see two very small things that could be fixed, but if you don't agree with me ...
May 23, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Five
Hello it's me TropicalRain again. May I just say this is one of the best chapters you have written so far. Right from the beginning to the very end it ...
May 22, 2019 -
Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 4
Hello again, it is me TropicalRain. Let's just cut right to the chase. This was yet again another really well written chapter, and I loved every second of it. I ...
Apr 28, 2019 -
Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 3
Hello Shield. It is I TropicalRain again. Because it's review day I am going to try and review all your chapters. So let's start. Because everyone else has done a ...
Apr 28, 2019 -
Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 2
Hello! It's been a wile, but I am finally here with a few things to say about your chapter. I will try and make this quick. So comparing this to ...
Apr 22, 2019 -
Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 1
Hi! I'm TropicalRain and I'm here to talk about your chapter for a little while. So let's start. So I can't point out anything that is wrong because everyone else ...
Apr 9, 2019 -
Re: Rain- Chapter One
Hey, TropicalRain here to leave a review for you. And to help get your work out the green room. I really like the name to your story so far, it ...
Apr 7, 2019 -
Re: With the melting of the snow
Hello, it is I again TropicalRain, here to drop off a review for your, and help get this lovely work out the Green Room for you. Okay let's start by ...
Apr 6, 2019 -
Re: The train station
Hello, TropicalRain here with a few things to say about your short story. And to help get it out the Green Room. Okay let's start. The first thing I really ...
Apr 6, 2019 -
Re: As time flies by
Hi, Tropicalrain here to share a few words with you about your poem, and to help you get it out the green room. So let's start. I think this was ...
Apr 6, 2019 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 12
Hey @Liberty500! TropicalRain here with a few things to say about your work, and to help you get it out the green room. So I quickly read through your other ...
Apr 5, 2019
