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Haha, oh no! Except for a few choice pieces, my work back then was a little embarrassing. I may have to post something just so you don't go searching haha.

Cool, thanks. A little less of a headache to see in its proper form. I may return to this and try to be a little more vicious-like, but I would ...

Haha, hi penguin!

Don't want to be antagonistic here, but I liked "pockmarked"! It's an interesting image.

Hi voxina, since your piece has profanity in it, I've given it the rating of PG-13. Please make sure to rate your pieces in the future.

Thanks Cal! I had an earlier version up, but I took it down. I may post the story just so everyone can see what you've created this lovely mix for.

[Many thanks for the comments. Next section.] 059 Blue -- Looking Through the Window Upon leaving the salt merchant, Danielle hadn’t expected her whims to turn to a concrete purchase. ...

I think my favorite line was "That you would lay that first kiss upon my cheek, or better yet, my [s]own[/s] mouth" I would also work off the "you have ...

Wow, Via, that's really quite a confession. It's a terrible thing to have happened. I'm glad that you feel comfortable enough to share it with us, and really, getting it ...

Don't worry. ^_^ It was only ever meant to be a stand alone story. I think some people are just confused by the ending, as they're not used to reading ...

^_^ I think "ploo" is my favorite part.

Er... no need to post twice. *Locked*

Hey, thanks everyone for the crits. For those who may be struggling with the message/moral: a lot of literature in today's world tends to present a choice to the characters ...

*Moved*

I also thought to get rid of the "Do you?" and that the title needed to be amended. This was superb and I usually don't leave short comments like this, ...