[pre]I look at my reflection in the mirror
and it weeps though I do not.
The skys are dark and the weather dreary,
though I am all alone, nearly having to restrain myself
while indoors as to refrain from inducing physical harm.
My friend are deeply concerned and wish to abet me,
yet I shun them away.
Without you, I am all too emotionally distraught.
There is no love in my heart for the one that brought me joy
and warmed my heart was there one minute and gone the next.
Things were none but good.
Though the vibrations of this vehicle's might is far from nonexistent,
I feel not but your pain.
Your broken heart and unforgivable let-down
compells deep sorrow within me.
I can no longer feel as one with you
nor feel your ever emotion as I once did.
For through your untimely demise,
we have inevitably grown apart;
but the memory of you shall be instilled upon this shallow heart
until that moment in which it will evoke that final enthrawling beat.[/pre]
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