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...and here I am at chapter two! :-D Basically everything Masq has said echoes my own thoughts (which makes reviewing a little tricky). So if I repeat anything that's already ...

Hello! I noticed this story in the Green Room, so I thought I'd rescue it. And I'd like to apologise in advance for any typos that this review might have. ...

Hello again! :) Here to review chapter two! A couple of quibbles for this one: Goodness.” I sighed, having lost my third game of tic tac toe in a row ...

I was browsing through the All Literary section looking for something to review, when I saw the second chapter of this, so I thought I'd drop by and give this ...

Hi, there! Thought I'd check out your short story, and here's a review. Couple of nitpicky things first. He approaches the house, an assassin, extremely quiet and subtle and scans ...

I'm finally caught up! Hello again! XD I picked up on a couple of iffy sentences that I thought could use some work, but your previous reviewers have picked up ...

I'm back! Let's get into it, shall we? I had quickly looked the other way when Mrs. M. asked about a missing photo. I couldn't give it back, I just ...

I don't really have all that much to say about this chapter... your previous reviewers have already given you some feedback about the nitpicky stuff, so I guess I'll just ...

Hello again! I am back to review. :) Nitpicks first, then I'll talk more generally. I woke up as the sunlight poured into my room. I yawned and stretched. Somehow ...

GAAAH... I loved this chapter/part/excerpt/thingy so MUCH. I thought Part 1 was impressive but you upped the ante just gorgeously. Colour me impressed. My only issue with this was the ...

I'M HERE! And speaking in caps lock, apparently. Probably because I enjoyed this chapter so much. This is probably my favourite part of the story that I've read, and it ...

Hello again! Here to review Part Two. Didn't pick up on any grammatical errors with this chapter, which was good, and I thought that it was even better than part ...

Hi there! I noticed the third chapter of this was in the Green Room, so I thought I'd start reading this from the start. By the time that I get ...

Hulloooo! Taken me a few days longer than I thought it would've, but I'm back to review. You have a couple of typos in this chapter. If you want me ...

Me again! Okay, we're meeting new characters and learning a bit more about the world here, which is great. You've already had two great reviews that have dealt with most ...