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Hey there! Toboldlygo here with a review for you! This is such a beautiful, heartfelt poem! It really evokes thoughts of abandonment yet still having hope for better relationships with ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here with a review for you! This chapter is fantastic! I really love what you're doing with the story. However, I do have some thoughts about the ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! Let's get this out the Green Room now, shall we? So, the first thing I noticed is that there is a lack of ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here with a review for you! Wow, I've really fallen behind. The first thing I noticed, though, was that Zoltar is terrified of whatever may come out ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! I'll continue to review your other chapters in the next couple of days. I also am on my phone, so I apologize for ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! Let's get this piece out the Green Room now! Also, an fyi that I'm on my phone so this will probably not be ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! Let's get this piece out the Green Room now. So the first thing I noticed is that there is a great story here, ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! Chapter Three here we go. A few nitpicky things, first: "Zoltar woke with a start. His heart was pumping as he sat up." ...

Hey there! Time for my second chapter review! My first impression was that this took place immediately after the volcano erupted in Chapter 1, but it seemed as I read ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here with my review! As a general rule, your characters are likeable and real. I think it's wonderful to see work featuring dragons in a positive light! ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! Let's get this out the Green Room now. :) I'm very glad that you got Katie out of that world but dang, that ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! I'll get this out the Green Room and then go back and review the other chapters like you asked. I've really liked what ...

Hey there! I missed Review Day but let me help you get this piece out of the Green Room! Your character is very likeable and approachable, but this was countered ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! Let's get this piece out of the Green Room! First of all, I love what you've done with this piece! It's a lovely ...

Hey! Toboldlygo here for a review! Overall, this is a well-written piece. I loved that it seemed to be provocative and turned out to be someone dying. I thought that ...