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Re: The Parent Magnet *editing*
Timmyjake here to pull this out of the cobwebs and give you a review! Ok, I found this really good and entrancing. I'll just hit my little nitpicks. In a ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Chess And Other Games
Timmyjake here to give you a review on World Review Cup Day! We're tryin to win here!! Ok, I will just hit this for the big spots in punctuation to ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Four Walls.
Timmyjake here to give you a short review! This is a very short story, and its not really a story, almost like a essay. I will review it as best ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Do You Remember Jonnie Casey? (3/3)
Timmyjake here to give you a review! I haven't read the other parts of it, although I probably should. This was in the Green Room and on behalf of West ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Shadowed Pryde: Chapter One
Timmyjake here to leave you with a review! I have never watched the X-Men, although I want to. I need to! So this review will be given to you without ...
Dec 27, 2013 -
Re: It's time to say Goodbye
Timmyjake here to give you a review as promised. I'm punctual, too! ;) Ok, so the first thing I noticed was the lack of 18+ language. Unless I missed something, ...
Dec 27, 2013 -
Re: 'End of Year' Poem
Timmyjake here to leave you a short review. I shouldn't be on YWS right now. *Looks each way* Coast clear. Here I go! :D You rhyme each one! I am ...
Dec 27, 2013 -
Re: You're getting warmer
Timmyjake here to leave you a review on Global Warming, oh, err, You're Getting Warmer. To be honest, I don't agree that the polar ice caps are melting, and if ...
Dec 27, 2013 -
Re: The Simpliest Thing
Timmyjake here to leave you a short review!! Ok, I really liked this. It's very emotional and passionate! I will just go through a few nitpicks of mine now... Ok, ...
Dec 27, 2013 -
Re: Don't give up...
Timmyjake here to leave you with a short review! I loved this poem! A lot of people prefer poems that don't rhyme, I don't. I like seeing that systematical rhyming ...
Dec 27, 2013 -
Re: Freedom
Timmyjake to give you a short review! This is really good! You have this way of describing the setting that just lays it out so well. I will just hit ...
Dec 26, 2013 -
Re: French Hens and the Spirit (Part 3 Twelve Days Before Christmas) *Edited*
Timmyjake here to give you another review! You have been challenged to write these twelve short stories... I have challenged myself to wait for and review each of them... Here ...
Dec 26, 2013 -
Re: Health Is Wealth
Timmyjake here to give you a review! My grandfather is a heavy smoker, so I know what its like. I'm trying something new here. Never done real quotes before. Lets ...
Dec 25, 2013 -
Re: Death Won't Set You Free
Timmyjake here to give you a review! This is very touching, almost poetic really. Its beautiful! It will help everyone who is depressed! My only nitpick is the beginning, which ...
Dec 25, 2013 -
Re: One Thing
Timmyjake here to leave you a review! I will just hit my little nitpicks!! At the first paragraph I want you so badly, but I don't tell you. Sorry, I ...
Dec 25, 2013
