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TimmyJake

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  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Parent Magnet *editing*

    Timmyjake here to pull this out of the cobwebs and give you a review! Ok, I found this really good and entrancing. I'll just hit my little nitpicks. In a ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Chess And Other Games

    Timmyjake here to give you a review on World Review Cup Day! We're tryin to win here!! Ok, I will just hit this for the big spots in punctuation to ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Spiritual, General Re: Four Walls.

    Timmyjake here to give you a short review! This is a very short story, and its not really a story, almost like a essay. I will review it as best ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: Do You Remember Jonnie Casey? (3/3)

    Timmyjake here to give you a review! I haven't read the other parts of it, although I probably should. This was in the Green Room and on behalf of West ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Shadowed Pryde: Chapter One

    Timmyjake here to leave you with a review! I have never watched the X-Men, although I want to. I need to! So this review will be given to you without ...

    Dec 27, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Spiritual Re: It's time to say Goodbye

    Timmyjake here to give you a review as promised. I'm punctual, too! ;) Ok, so the first thing I noticed was the lack of 18+ language. Unless I missed something, ...

    Dec 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: 'End of Year' Poem

    Timmyjake here to leave you a short review. I shouldn't be on YWS right now. *Looks each way* Coast clear. Here I go! :D You rhyme each one! I am ...

    Dec 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: You're getting warmer

    Timmyjake here to leave you a review on Global Warming, oh, err, You're Getting Warmer. To be honest, I don't agree that the polar ice caps are melting, and if ...

    Dec 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Simpliest Thing

    Timmyjake here to leave you a short review!! Ok, I really liked this. It's very emotional and passionate! I will just go through a few nitpicks of mine now... Ok, ...

    Dec 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Don't give up...

    Timmyjake here to leave you with a short review! I loved this poem! A lot of people prefer poems that don't rhyme, I don't. I like seeing that systematical rhyming ...

    Dec 27, 2013
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Freedom

    Timmyjake to give you a short review! This is really good! You have this way of describing the setting that just lays it out so well. I will just hit ...

    Dec 26, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Supernatural Re: French Hens and the Spirit (Part 3 Twelve Days Before Christmas) *Edited*

    Timmyjake here to give you another review! You have been challenged to write these twelve short stories... I have challenged myself to wait for and review each of them... Here ...

    Dec 26, 2013
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: Health Is Wealth

    Timmyjake here to give you a review! My grandfather is a heavy smoker, so I know what its like. I'm trying something new here. Never done real quotes before. Lets ...

    Dec 25, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Death Won't Set You Free

    Timmyjake here to give you a review! This is very touching, almost poetic really. Its beautiful! It will help everyone who is depressed! My only nitpick is the beginning, which ...

    Dec 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: One Thing

    Timmyjake here to leave you a review! I will just hit my little nitpicks!! At the first paragraph I want you so badly, but I don't tell you. Sorry, I ...

    Dec 25, 2013


Go in fear of abstractions.
— Ezra Pound