TimmyJake

Timmy here for a review! Nitpicks I lay upon my back as I muse on their beauty. ---This is really just me and my taste, but I think that this ...

Timmy here for a review! Nitpicks Fluff and Clouds Blood and Gore These all seemed to have a sense of opposites, except for these two. Fluff and Clouds are close ...

Timmy here for a quick review! Nitpicks first! Nitpicks When Maria was finished she watched Ben because he’d had one more rescue to complete than her. --Bolded part reads awkwardly. ...

Timmy here for a quick review! You will have to forgive me if this is short... There isn't much to nitpick on this beautiful piece of work! Nitpicks How do ...

Timmy here for a quick review! So I usually start off with nitpicks, since I read as I review. So... Nitpicks "Then stop being a... a... glutton for punishment." ---I ...

Timmy here for a quick review! Sorry I didn't get to this earlier... I have been offline mostly. :( Nitpicks -Why stand on ceremony, eh? I didn't dare contemplate just ...

Timmy here for a review!! First offf...... Nitpicks! Just the thought of his smile evoked one. ---Seems a bit vague for me... Maybe On my lips after that or something? ...

Timmy here for a review! If i seem to follow all of your works, don't be alarmed. I am only stalking them. :D Nitpicks High Horsedness- is the reason I ...

Timmy is here for a quick review before I go do something very important... Sleeeeeepppp Alright, I have specific style of reviewing, just like you have your specific style of ...

Timmy here for a review! I started this review quite a few weeks ago, but never finished it for some strange reason that only my keyboard remembers. Perhaps it will ...

Timmy here for a quick review! So this piece was really neat, and to me it bore the same tone as your previous piece, Can you hear the piano? Almost ...

Timmy here for a quick review! First off, welcome to YWS! This is a great piece to start off with! I always review as I read, so I will start ...

Timmy here for a quick review!! I read as I review, so nitpicks first! Nitpicks Sometimes I wonder whether it's the light from my body which is ---I think you ...

Timmy here for a quick review! You have to forgive me if this is short. There isn't really anything to nitpick on this piece. Just to make sure, I will ...

Timmy here for a quick review... I am sorry. Normally I would review this piece and the next few thousand lines would be cluttered with both my useless thoughts and ...